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Dark Angel
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0 posted 12-17-1999 07:36 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel



               NightFall  


While the crickets sing and the saccade's cry
I sit here and wonder at the beauty of the sky
The pastel colours created by the setting sun
There's no wonder Nature shares its passion

When the pastel colours slowly turn to slate
Patiently the dark velvet night I do await
The shimmering stars will come out to play
And the golden moon will light the way

For all of the creatures great and small
To find their way, during nightfall
The saccade's lay themselves to rest
For their passions have been expressed

Lovers dance under the Mystic moon
While with their emotions it does attune
I sit here and wonder at the beauty of the sky
Wanting to sing and wanting to cry.




 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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caroline
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1 posted 12-17-1999 07:54 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Hon, this is so beautiful! I know just the feeling you have here...you've expressed it with passion...you must be writing with those angel wings of yours!   Lovely!

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain


Dark Angel
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Caroline, thanks sweet one, you make me smile  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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3 posted 12-17-1999 11:10 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

So beautiful, Dark Angel! I love it!  

 Denise


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4 posted 12-17-1999 11:34 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

DA,
You did a good job on this one
I really enjoyed the read.
Dark Angel
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5 posted 12-17-1999 03:47 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Denise and Seymour, thanks so much for your lovely comments,I'm glad you enjoyed it.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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6 posted 12-17-1999 06:54 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Very well done soul-sib.  

 Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvilŠ
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because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

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7 posted 12-17-1999 06:58 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

DA - beautiful!

I have felt just that myself.

K
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DA this was excellent! But why you wanna cry girl?  Leave me a message or email k?
~hugs~
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Dark Angel...this is beautiful  
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Soul-brother, thanks so much  
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Severn, Thank you  
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Thank you WhtDove, cry? because it's beautiful  
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Ruth, thank you so much Hon  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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Dark Angel
I love what you write
I love your "velvet night"
Don't cry, for you shall have
Your "velvet knight"
Liz
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Beautiful imagery.....gorgeous piece DA....This is certainly a keeper...

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon


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Wow DA - I love this! I often look up at the sky and am just totally blown away by the beauty of it - sometimes I think people take the beauty around them for granted. You expressed this beautifully, I can actually see it. Well done.

Huggs.......
Dark Angel
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Elizabeth, Thanks so much hon  
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Pepper, Thank you I appreciate it.
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Moonshine Thank you, yes sometimes we do take it for granted don't we.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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15 posted 12-19-1999 08:32 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Sing - and rejoice - for with each sunset, there is an equally resplendent sunrise.....
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oh Miss Maree, you should repost this one for everyone to see in the current forum

I love this!
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17 posted 11-12-2007 06:52 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

I really enjoyed this

ARCTIC WIND
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