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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Absolutely Irrevocably surrendering Surrounding you Resounding in Passion’s pleasures rendering Enveloping walls Eternal impressions Primary expressions Entwining waterfalls A touch rippling Skin senses prolonging Sagacity and longing Tactile trance tripling Declaring devotion Prose unspoken Connections unbroken Embracing ocean Flying faraway Sky traveling Time unraveling Our love ballet Surreal spell cascading Resting replete Dancing downbeat Silent serenading Absolutely Love You © 1999 Corinne Bailey |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Corinne, I think you have excellent word usage in this. I really like 'Flying faraway Sky traveling Time unraveling Our love ballet' - wonderful romantic lines. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Severn! Corinne |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Lovely, beautiful, wonderful, absolutely!  Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Corinne, A little forceful but I enjoyed. |
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