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Corinne
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Absolutely

Irrevocably surrendering
Surrounding you
Resounding in
Passionís pleasures rendering

Enveloping walls
Eternal impressions
Primary expressions
Entwining waterfalls

A touch rippling  
Skin senses prolonging
Sagacity and longing
Tactile trance tripling

Declaring devotion
Prose unspoken
Connections unbroken
Embracing ocean

Flying faraway
Sky traveling
Time unraveling
Our love ballet

Surreal spell cascading
Resting replete
Dancing downbeat
Silent serenading

Absolutely
Love
You

© 1999 Corinne Bailey

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1 posted 12-17-1999 05:28 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Corinne, I think you have excellent word usage in this. I really like

'Flying faraway
Sky traveling
Time unraveling
Our love ballet'

- wonderful romantic lines.

Corinne
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Thank you, Severn!

Corinne
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Lovely, beautiful, wonderful, absolutely!  

 Denise


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Corinne,
A little forceful but I enjoyed.
 
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