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All My Love

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Justina
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0 posted 12-16-1999 10:44 PM       View Profile for Justina   Email Justina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Justina

When times get hard
And days go bad,
Stop and think
Of the Love we have.
It seems so good
And all so great
I wonder if it ever
Could be a mistake?
You were once my friend,
And now my Lover
There is no one else
For me to discover.
Now that we're Lovers
And better friends,
I don't want our
Dream to ever end.
You mean more than
Words could ever say,
But I need the reassurance
That you will stay.
I made up my mind long ago,
And I don't intend
To let you go!

© Copyright 1999 Justina - All Rights Reserved
cooljust
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since 12-15-1999
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1 posted 12-16-1999 11:34 PM       View Profile for cooljust   Email cooljust   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cooljust

Girl, you have skillz! Keep up the good work. I look for your work specifically because of the last one you wrote, I knew it would only get better.

Justin
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2 posted 12-17-1999 01:04 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Justina, I enjoyed this very much!  

 Denise


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3 posted 12-17-1999 05:43 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Don't think I've welcomed you yet - so...welcome!    

Nice poem.
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4 posted 12-17-1999 07:08 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Justina -

Friend to lover ..
what a great journey!
~*Marge*~


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