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andy
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0 posted 12-16-1999 07:14 PM       View Profile for andy   Email andy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for andy



The blanket of night will arrive with thunder,
and descend on NZ and try to plunder,
the last wisps of light that came down from the heavens,
and because of that crime we can't find our bearings.

The eve of the weekend is now upon us,
the light of the moon has indeed shown us,
the way home, safe to our beds,
so I can nod off, Goodnight sleepyhead.  


By andy



[This message has been edited by andy (edited 12-16-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 andy - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 12-16-1999 07:20 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Andy -
Another charmer is what
you have written.
Enjoyed it much.
Sleep well.
Love ~*Marge*~

 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Seaangel
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2 posted 12-16-1999 11:04 PM       View Profile for Seaangel   Email Seaangel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seaangel

Goodnight, andy!

Denise
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Charming, indeed! Goodnight, Andy!  

 Denise


Severn
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4 posted 12-17-1999 06:01 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Well, since you are already asleep I will say good morning!

You're a great poet for an 11 year old you know (even if you do steal green milk...
just joking   )
poetFemmeFatale
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5 posted 12-19-1999 12:13 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Hold it - hold it!   Did someone say you're 11 years old?  Gees, you certainly are a splendid poet for such a young age!  I can't wait to see what you write like in another 10 years!  LOL  You have a fabulous way with rhyming indeed!  Splendid vocab too!  Keep on writing, definately!  BRAVO

 - - - If I can just touch you once, then I feel I have accomplished what I am called to do...- - pFF

Martie
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Andy--I do like the way you write!  
andy
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7 posted 12-20-1999 11:59 PM       View Profile for andy   Email andy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for andy

Thanks people   !
I've had "heaps" of replies.  
The poems I have seen are wonderful  
I hope to see some others     
samsonheart
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8 posted 12-21-1999 12:30 PM       View Profile for samsonheart   Email samsonheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for samsonheart

great poem andy, the kind I could read to my nephews when I tuck them in.

samsonheart
 
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