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Lonely in Loving A Star

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Blondie
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0 posted 12-16-1999 06:00 PM       View Profile for Blondie   Email Blondie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Blondie

A rising star needs time and space
To gleam, to glow and shine.
Let the world behold, adore, embrace
Warm memories are mine.
Away from the light
I moved,
So there might
Be more for the world to see.
Alone at night,
I long for the bright
Star who belonged to me.

Shimmering, shining,
Your gilded glow is
Luminescent and coruscating.
Remembering and pining here below,
My star will see me waiting.

Into the skies
A million eyes
Look to you for truth.
While I alone
Have truly known
The brilliance of your youth.



 "Therefore do not worry about tomorrow, for tomorrow will worry about itself. Each day has enough trouble of its own." Matthew 6:34

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1 posted 12-16-1999 07:20 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Lovely, Melissa!

 Nail to the mast her holy flag,
Set every threadbare sail-
And give her to the god of storms,
The lightning and the gale!
-Oliver Wendell Holmes

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Yes, this is lovely, I enjoyed!  

 Denise


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3 posted 12-17-1999 05:29 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Very nice, Melissa.  
Blondie
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4 posted 12-17-1999 02:37 PM       View Profile for Blondie   Email Blondie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Blondie

Thanks everyone  
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Wow! Blondie, do I wish I'd written this....outstanding!

HUGS

 Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...


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Thanks Rainbow.  
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Beautiful Melissa.....

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon


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