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Ode to the Woman who essentially was my Mother

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Beri
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0 posted 12-16-1999 04:56 PM       View Profile for Beri   Email Beri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Beri

Watching me from above,
Showering on me all your love.
Smiling down on me,
Pushing me to be all that I can be.
Thoughts of you give me the inspiration I need,
You enter my mind every time I do a good deed.
You left me so long ago,
I do always try to remember though
That your suffering is now done,
And you're shining as happily as the sun.
You've gone to a better place
And I can imagine that smile upon your face,
But I do have to admit to my pain
And say that sometimes I have gone quite insane.
It's hard not having you here in body, but just in soul,
But each day I remind myself of my goal:
To remember you're with me every step of the way,
To remember you guide me through each and every day...
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I miss you, Aunt Alice, that is for sure
And each day I still love you more and more.


 If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be...
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Cuddlez
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since 11-27-1999
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1 posted 12-16-1999 05:08 PM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

Great poem. Just because she isnt your mother by blood doesnt mean she doesnt care as much about you ). Its obvious the reverse is true with you

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Beri
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2 posted 12-16-1999 06:38 PM       View Profile for Beri   Email Beri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beri

Thanks again Cuddlez!  She is my aunt through blood, my mother's sister, she raised my brother and I when times were tough, up until she passed away.  You are right in saying the reverse is true.  Thank you!  

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