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Sunshine
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0 posted 1999-12-16 01:23 PM


Santa’s Special Ride

Silent whispers, tinsel dreams
Santa rides the moonlight beams,
Touching finger to nose in delight,
Makes for magic in the night.

Oh Santa, I’m so very glad
You’re in my heart, just like my dad,
And you keep coming, while he’s gone,
You bring memories, and his song.

And Santa, just like my Mom
I’ve laid out cookies for you to munch on,
For she’d make them, just for you,
So I hope you like mine too.

Mom and Dad have been gone some time,
But in my heart, they made you mine,
And you come here, every year,
And wipe away my quiet tears.

They made you special and unique,
And even today, I still steal a peek,
But you don’t care, you’re in great form,
For in my husband, you’re the norm.

Silent whispers, tinsel dreams
Santa rides the moonlight beams,
Touching finger to nose in delight,
Makes for magic in the night.

16 December, 1999
©KRJ




 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


© Copyright 1999 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 1999-12-16 01:58 PM


Sunshine, this is wonderful! I can relate to every word!  

 Denise



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2 posted 1999-12-16 03:08 PM


Thank you denise, it's from the heart...
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3 posted 1999-12-16 03:12 PM


Sunshine this is beautiful, with a mix of sadness and joy - I hope you have a lovely christmas.

K

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4 posted 1999-12-17 02:33 PM


Thank you, Severn - I SHALL have a wonderful holiday, because I will be experiencing new and wonderful sights and sounds...



 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow



Michael
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5 posted 1999-12-17 02:39 PM


Great poem Sunshine...special, indeed.  

Michael

Denise
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6 posted 1999-12-17 04:50 PM


Yep, from the heart...I can tell!  

 Denise



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7 posted 1999-12-17 04:55 PM


So very sweet and so very special, straight from the heart indeed.
Merry Christmas Sunshine!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



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8 posted 1999-12-17 04:58 PM


Michael, denise, d'angel, all I can say is "thank you..."

you're all beginning to know me too well...

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow



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9 posted 1999-12-17 05:09 PM


I echo all above Sunshine  
Loved the read...

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!



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10 posted 1999-12-17 05:30 PM


I love it, Sunshine!! This is beautiful!
Sunshine
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11 posted 1999-12-17 05:43 PM


Pepper, suthern, thank you so much for your kind words...

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow



Isis
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12 posted 1999-12-17 05:57 PM


Indeed Sunshine, a mixture of sadness and joy.  And a poem that reminds us all how special Christmas was, is and always shall be.  

 What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
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