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She calls to me

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 12-16-1999 12:06 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

         She calls to me

Omnipresence in mornings mist.
Plays like notes of a flautist.
Permeating all that stir,
Like frankincense and myrrh.

Painting my mind with willows brush,
Stroking my heart with recall touch.
Wafting me in a phantoms flair,
Embracing me in fragrant air.

Dancing under my eye lids,
Shadows on a blood red grid.
Irradiating moon light streams,
Coloring through a torrid dream.

Her movements a mesmeric dance
I watch it, transfixed in trance.
And wonder at this visions goal,
Burning in my aching soul.

Does she call me in genteel?
In the softness of conceal?
This I plead, in my persist.
Till the sun dries up the mist.

Do I wait, another phase,
Till I meet her in the haze?

© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 12-16-1999 12:59 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

He Calls To Me

He calls to me in haunting words
Revealed in rhythmic poetry
And in the stars so late at night
Placed on display for me to see

He calls to me in open skies
Where clouds are laced in fields of blue
And from the depths of misty dreams
Where once again we are us two

He calls to me in music notes
In the depth of treble cleft
And even now I hear his voice
Calling like he never left

Oh, he calls to me, and I call too
The only difference being
In my longing, I picture him
In his, it's her he's seeing


Inspirational Seymore  

Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 12-16-1999 01:21 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Sy,
The poet paints with willows brush.
And the readers sit in silent hush
Consuming the beauty of his words
Of heartfelt songs til now unheard
A lovely poem upon the screen
To many eyes remains unseen
So hopfully this poet will look
At the prospects of a published book
With autographed copies to all the Passionate Poets!
Love ya,
Liz

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3 posted 12-16-1999 01:30 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

good, good, good, good, good...

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

Denise
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4 posted 12-16-1999 02:01 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wonderful, Seymour! Did I ever tell you that you have a way with words that I like very much?!  

 Denise


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5 posted 12-16-1999 03:42 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Sy - some conflict going on here.

Fantastically written and I will be fighting to get in the line for an autographed copy. Actually I probably won't - you'll have to mail me one!!!

Ruth - your poem was lovely.

K
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 12-16-1999 03:51 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Hoot,
Your poem has touched me tender.
So full of words of splendor.
You have a talent I admire,
That any male would inpire.
*L* Sy

Elizabeth,
Your loving words and clever wit,
Has thrown my wife into a fit.
For she too nags me into look
The possibility of a book.
But I for one fail to see,
The amateur that I be.
In the sea of professionals
With poetry two-dimensional.
I love you for your sweet medallion.
It's praise enough for this old stallion.
*L* Sy

Denise the sweet,
I love the pleasure of your read,
If I were a Knight I'd grant you a deed.
*L*
Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 12-16-1999 04:08 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Sy,
Amateur you claim to be
But that is not what others see
Someone said you write like Frost
And I say your poems should not be lost
They should be published, that's for sure
You've got Frost's talent, even more
I'm sure that many will agree
The beauty of your poetry
Liz
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 12-16-1999 05:54 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Liz,
It's in back of my thoughts not hard to find
And the older I get the more in mind.
Thank you. *L* Sy
andy
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9 posted 12-16-1999 06:55 PM       View Profile for andy   Email andy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for andy

Sniff...sob...Sy ignored me!

Well then...I'm just going to...to...to cry!

(   )

Well just noticed this is under andy - our newest recruit fromthe household of Sea and Severn - but I think you can guess who really wrote this Sy!!!!
LOL

[This message has been edited by andy (edited 12-16-1999).]
Marge Tindal
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10 posted 12-16-1999 07:57 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Seymour -
With each new poem you write
I read and think ...
such lovely thoughts put to paper.
Indeed, if a book of your poetry
were on a shelf at Barnes and Noble ...
I'd pick up a copy.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 12-16-1999 11:44 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Andy
Please do not cry
For you mean more to me,
Then all the porpoise in the sea.
Marge,
Thank you so much, if I ever do I'll give you a copy. *L*
Martie
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12 posted 12-17-1999 12:57 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Sy, so many words of praise you gain whenever the muse has used your name
you must know this lady here
sits in awe of you, my dear.
Elizabeth Santos
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13 posted 12-17-1999 07:21 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

See Sy, Words like that coming from a poet such as Martie, should ring well in your ear.
I have been telling you this for a long time.You underestimate your talents, being the SHY person that you are.
Love ya,
Liz
Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 12-17-1999 06:03 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Martie,
Thank you so much for the coments
Since I am so shy they mean much to me.
Liz,
Perhaps I do but I wouldn't believe anyone but you *L* Sy
Nan
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I've always time for a sigh for Sy......
Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 12-17-1999 07:30 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Nan,
Why thank you Nan and I sigh for you. *L*
 
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