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Loneliness

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                   "LONELINESS"


   Is being lonely being without you?
   Please tell me because i have no clue.
   Today you left and i feel lonely.
   And the emptiness in my heart just keeps growing.
   Should i feel lonely, but why?
   Is it because we said good-bye?
   Don't worry to a good-bye there's always a hello.
   Just like to a yes there's always a no.
   To a bad thing there's always a good thing.
   And maybe in the future around your finger i'll
     put the ring.
   Yes the ring, the one in which you say i do.
   The one which will show you how much i love you.
   So loneliness isn't forever.
   But what is, is you and i being together.


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Oh, how nice! I hope you aren't unloved and apart for too long.

 Nail to the mast her holy flag,
Set every threadbare sail-
And give her to the god of storms,
The lightning and the gale!
-Oliver Wendell Holmes

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