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Shutting me off...is so hard to do

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The Jackal
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0 posted 12-16-1999 01:35 AM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

i dont think you like me pretty girl
i dont fit your mold
and your checking your hair
in my eyes
once again..
shutting me off
from your world
why the hell should i care?
so i know i dont fit in there
your perfect little hate
your perfect time
that you make me wait
what if you mean everything
nothing and anything
despite all the carnage
i still flow to you
whats exactly my problem
its time like this
when i know thats its true
my faith is falling
when i say
or scream
i do love hating you..



 
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Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 12-16-1999 03:20 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

You have captured her personality and a whole relationship in just a few lines.
This is wonderful!
Liz
Severn
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2 posted 12-17-1999 06:02 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Powerful words - and a great capturing. Well done!
passing shadows
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3 posted 04-15-2005 06:15 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

yep...I relate
Artic Wind
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4 posted 11-12-2007 06:55 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

I enjoyed your poem, but i would like to say, how did you come up with that name

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