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Stage Struck Moon

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Marge Tindal
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Stage Struck Moon
~Marge Tindal~ 1999

She holds such charm as she slowly
moves across the vast stage of my night.
A performance worthy of accolades.
She bows and the curtains of night close.

The curtains of the sunny morning
open and she exits from my view.
And then I realize ...
she's doing an encore
for someone else
half a world away.

Encore !  Encore !





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 1999 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 12-16-1999 01:31 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Marge, you have outdone yourself, my friend. This is an exquisite piece.

Love ya, K
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2 posted 12-16-1999 03:24 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Marge!
Great performance!
Encore!
I applaud this piece.
:iz
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Severn -
Why, aren't you just
the sweetest.  Thank you.
I hope the moonbeams
reach you with
smiles across the miles.

Elizabeth, my friend -
So glad you liked it too.


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Encore, Encore  
Nicely done Marge  
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There's a sound of an echo here..

HUGS

 Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...


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Beautiful, Marge! I love it!  

 Denise


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Across the stage she comes again
meeting her audience with beams in the night.
She won't be around to read the reviews
when morning breaks with light.

*Thank you, my friends.
Encore finis`


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8 posted 12-16-1999 08:33 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Hey, this is cool, Marge! I love the metaphor in this piece.

 Nail to the mast her holy flag,
Set every threadbare sail-
And give her to the god of storms,
The lightning and the gale!
-Oliver Wendell Holmes

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Wow Marge.....yep..now I see!!!!
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Elizabeth -
Thank you.
The moon is my spirit.

RobertB -
Thanks to you, to Kevin
and to mother nature for
the inspiration for this piece.



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Wonderful , Margie. May we continue to get mooned!
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Excellent.
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Balladeer -
Thanks for enjoying it ...
The poem !  The poem !
And just wait until Toe finds
out you want to get 'mooned' !

Mike -
Thank you so much.
I'm glad you liked this piece.


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Very well done without a doubt!  

Justina
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Wonderful, Marge!!
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You're the best Marge, the moon told me so, and I said, I know.
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Justina -
I'm glad you liked it.

SeaAngel -
The wonder of her light
is sent into our night.
Glad you found it wonderful.

Martie -
The moon just inspires, doesn't it?
What a thoughtful comment from you.
Thank you.


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