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Denise
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0 posted 12-15-1999 10:57 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Denise

The years pass by us so quickly
Like a coursing river swiftly
From the day we are born until we die
We're here then gone in the blink of an eye.

But this moment is ours to hold  
To possess even should we grow old
This moment that we can make last
This treasure that shall be our past.

And as the years go rushing by
Like the hurried flocks in the autumn sky
We'll hold that memory always dear
That 'moment in time' forever near.

And if my days on earth be done
Don't grieve too long, my darling one
Just reach inside your heart to find
That cherished memory, fair and kind.




 Denise




[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 12-16-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Denise - All Rights Reserved
Mike
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1 posted 12-15-1999 11:10 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

As usual... wonderful.
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2 posted 12-15-1999 11:11 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Denise -
Very pretty ..
as is your picture.
~*Marge*~

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3 posted 12-15-1999 11:13 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Nice to see you, Denise - and of course, it's a great poem.....
Master
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4 posted 12-15-1999 11:17 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Very Sweet! *S*
Martie
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5 posted 12-15-1999 11:59 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Denise, this is a lovely poem and you are a lovely lady.
Denise
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6 posted 12-16-1999 12:08 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you so much, Mike, Marge, Nan, Master and Martie! So glad you liked it!  

 Denise


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7 posted 12-16-1999 03:13 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Denise,
I love this poem! Yes, A moment can stand still in your memory, and you've captured it beautifully.
I love your work.
Liz
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8 posted 12-16-1999 03:26 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

very pretty D yuh work is inspirational
RSEvans
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9 posted 12-16-1999 07:09 AM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

Never been disappointed D...another beautiful memory.

 Knowlege tempered by wisdom...Wisdom tamed by youth.
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10 posted 12-16-1999 07:17 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Now this one I can identify with.  

 Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvilŠ
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because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

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Dark Angel
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11 posted 12-16-1999 08:37 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

A lovely poem Denise.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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12 posted 12-16-1999 08:40 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Nicely done lady...(yanno?...you don't write like a blond?)
Sally S.
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13 posted 12-16-1999 09:15 AM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Lovely, Denise!!  And it's nice to see you finally!  
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14 posted 12-16-1999 01:35 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

will ditto any of the above lol, great poem, great pic.....   
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15 posted 12-16-1999 01:39 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Elizabeth - Thanks so much!  
wayoutwalt - Thanks and so nice to have you back!  
RS-Wow, thank you! I've never been disappointed in any of yours either!  
DreamEvil- Thanks! I'm glad you can relate!  
Dark Angel- Thanks so much!  
Toe- Glad you liked it! Thanks!  
Sally-Thanks so much and it was great to see you too!  


 Denise


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16 posted 12-16-1999 03:36 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Well thank you lloveit! You beat me to the post! I'm glad you liked it!

 Denise


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17 posted 12-16-1999 11:18 PM       View Profile for Seaangel   Email Seaangel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seaangel

Reminding me that I need to savour every moment...thank you for that.


 "Stop this day and night with me and you shall possess the origin of all poems,
You shall possess the good of the earth and sun (there are millions of suns left,)
You shall no longer take things at second or third hand, nor look through the eyes of the dead, nor feed on the spectres in books,
You shall not look through my eyes either, nor take things from me,
You shall listen to all sides and filter them from your self." >Walt Whitman, Song of Myself.
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18 posted 12-16-1999 11:25 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Pure poetry, Denise, as beautiful as always.

 To the world you might be just one person but to one person you might just be the world.

Denise
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19 posted 12-17-1999 12:37 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you Seaangel and Balladeer for your kind comments! They mean so much to me!

 Denise


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In the space between moments


20 posted 12-17-1999 10:09 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Wow Denise, this is gorgeous!  Wonderful wonderful work!      


~Only within the depths of the most ominous darkness can the beauty of light truly be understood~  


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Denise
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21 posted 12-17-1999 10:20 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you, Krista, I'm so glad you enjoyed it!  

 Denise


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22 posted 12-17-1999 11:18 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

The time certainly does fly don't it? Every year seems a little quicker, wonder why that is?  Just lovely Denise!
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excellent!
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24 posted 07-04-2004 11:34 PM       View Profile for Tequilia_Sunrise   Email Tequilia_Sunrise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tequilia_Sunrise

wonderful
 
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