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Rebuilding a Friendship

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Beri
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0 posted 12-15-1999 10:57 PM       View Profile for Beri   Email Beri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Beri

This poem was written in dedication to a friend of mine, as you can see by the name...
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Oh, my dearest Michelle...
I know I have put you through hell.
I hope you're able to believe
That I really am sorry to make you grieve.
I hope you can fathom the strength
To go to such length
As to one day forgive me
For all the pain I've caused thee.
I love you from the bottom of my heart,
And I'd hate to see us completely fall apart.
I know I must give you time
And let you see me make that climb
Back up to being a healthy and trustworthy friend,
Who can win you back after your heart has had a chance to mend.
I know it can never be the same
And for that I, of course, take the blame,
But I have hopes that maybe one day
It can be better and we'll be able to say
That we have grown stronger
And our friendship may last for eternity and longer...


 If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be...
© Copyright 1999 Beri - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 12-15-1999 11:20 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Beri -
A true friend's apology
even if not eventually accepted ...
is a sign of great maturity
and honesty.
I hope your friend accepts these
lovely words from your heart.


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Beri
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2 posted 12-16-1999 04:01 PM       View Profile for Beri   Email Beri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beri

Thanks to you Marge...
That sure is what I am aiming at, a true apology, I just pray she gets the point also.  

 If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be...
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3 posted 12-16-1999 06:20 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Beri: I never think apologies are neccesary between friends although we all make them, but deep inside, we know our friends and why they say or do what they do and I guess, that's why they are our friends because we love and know them, inside out.  

HUGS

 Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...




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Beri
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4 posted 12-16-1999 06:32 PM       View Profile for Beri   Email Beri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beri

Rainbow, I never used to think apologies were necessary either, I agreed with you 100% and I still basically do, just sometimes, this time, I think it was definitely needed.  Thank you so much for the hugs!!  Much needed and appreciated!

 If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be...
 
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