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RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

0 posted 1999-12-15 09:46 PM

Full Moon

As the sunsets
on my environment
shining still on another's
beyond the skyline….
I look to the East
for the somber red warmth
of my full moon
wishing on it then
letting it go
to be held by others
past the horizon.

RB

if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 1999-12-15 11:32 PM

I like this, Robert.
Of course, I'm maniacal about the moon.
Beautiful.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-12-15 11:49 PM

I enjoyed this Robert! What a lovely picture you painted for me!

Denise

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

3 posted 1999-12-16 03:54 AM

You and Marge are on the same track.
This is lovely, and spoken in few words
Liz

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

4 posted 1999-12-16 04:01 PM

Thank you all....somehow I knew you guys would understand!!!

Robert

if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

andy
Junior Member

since 1999-12-16

Posts 17

5 posted 1999-12-16 08:41 PM

That is short, but very effective in the way you put the words.
A poem I like very much!

[This message has been edited by andy (edited 12-16-1999).]

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

6 posted 1999-12-16 08:51 PM

I like "short". Long bores me!!!!

Thanks!!

poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite

since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

7 posted 1999-12-19 12:34 PM

What a lovely little piece! I too, love the moon! It is so mysteriously wonderful - almost powerful! Thanks for sharing her with others like me!

- - - If I can just touch you once, then I feel I have accomplished what I am called to do...- - pFF

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

8 posted 1999-12-19 10:10 PM

Pfff, thanks for letting her go Robert. What would I have done without the moon over here tonight.....she's beautiful, just as your poem. : )
Merry Christmas to you !

Munda : )

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

9 posted 1999-12-20 07:34 AM

There are some things we just all have to share...

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