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RobertB
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0 posted 12-15-1999 09:46 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RobertB


Full Moon


As the sunsets
on my environment
shining still on another's
beyond the skyline….
I look to the East
for the somber red warmth
of my full moon
wishing on it then
letting it go
to be held by others
past the horizon.

RB


 if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
© Copyright 1999 RobertB - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 12-15-1999 11:32 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

I like this, Robert.
Of course, I'm maniacal about the moon.
Beautiful.
~*Marge*~


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Denise
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I enjoyed this Robert! What a lovely picture you painted for me!

 Denise


Elizabeth Santos
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You and Marge are on the same track.
This is lovely, and spoken in few words
Liz
RobertB
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Thank you all....somehow I knew you guys would understand!!!

Robert

 if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
andy
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5 posted 12-16-1999 08:41 PM       View Profile for andy   Email andy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for andy

That is short, but very effective in the way you put the words.
A poem I like very much!  

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RobertB
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I like "short". Long bores me!!!!


Thanks!!
poetFemmeFatale
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7 posted 12-19-1999 12:34 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

What a lovely little piece!  I too, love the moon!  It is so mysteriously wonderful - almost powerful!  Thanks for sharing her with others like me!  

 - - - If I can just touch you once, then I feel I have accomplished what I am called to do...- - pFF

Munda
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Pfff, thanks for letting her go Robert. What would I have done without the moon over here tonight.....she's beautiful, just as your poem. : )
Merry Christmas to you !

Munda : )
Nan
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There are some things we just all have to share...
 
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