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My Lady

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DreamEvil
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0 posted 12-15-1999 08:11 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I love my Lady for her gentle praise.
Her compassion shines through in all she does.
She lifts me up when my conscience weighs.
My Lady sees me not what I once was.
Only she sees the truth behind my mask.
Her words soothe both my Beast and inner child.
I would save the world if she did but ask.
Her feminine wiles have kept me beguiled.
Of female virtue is she paradigm.
Her quiet voice woke my sleeping reason.
She is the height I aspire to climb.
I love her more with each passing season.
Her mercurial moods are my delight.
On angel's wings does our love take flight.


©1999 DreamEvil



 Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©
-------------------------------------------------------
"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade
(Marquis de Sade)

© Copyright 1999 DreamEvil - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 12-15-1999 09:18 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful! Very lovely poem!

 Denise


Marilyn
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2 posted 12-15-1999 09:48 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

A lovely tribute to a lovely lady (I am sure). Good work my friend.
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 12-15-1999 09:51 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Another romantic one Dream....I like  
Skyfyre
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4 posted 12-15-1999 10:34 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

"Her mercurial moods are my delight"

How apt -- few people would claim to like mercurial moods, but I have the feeling you are quite sincere.  Apparently the two of you are made for each other ...   

...and if you tell me that this was another of your poetic exercises, and not truly a tribute to your Lady, I'll ... well, I'll be very upset!!  

--Kess


 You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end.


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5 posted 12-16-1999 12:07 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Dream - this is a dream of a poem...

My friend, your lady is blessed.

K
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6 posted 12-16-1999 07:38 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Oh! Soul-Brother, This is so beautiful, absolutley beautiful!!

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Julie Jordan Scott
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7 posted 12-16-1999 09:29 AM       View Profile for Julie Jordan Scott   Email Julie Jordan Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Julie Jordan Scott's Home Page   View IP for Julie Jordan Scott

a wonderful testimony to love to wake up to read!  thanks so much...  *sigh* ahhhhh, love!

 I am a Life Purpose Coach who specializes in assisting
men and women to clarify their Life Purpose and then in turn
live true to their purpose. After 5 years working with the
Severely Mentally Ill in County Mental Health, I gave up the
bureaucracy (and safe, secure blanket) of this environment
to pursue my own purpose and passion.

poetFemmeFatale
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8 posted 12-16-1999 02:29 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Dream, this is exquisitely beautiful....How I do admire your soft and romantic side, as oppose to your being forlorn.  Although, I know that all your emotions make up who you are, and I do admire you, and your expression in your writing.  You truly have a gift, and I want to say that I hope your holidays are filled with cheer, and happiness.  I will continue to read on...as you have shared many works with us of late!  

 - - - If I can just touch you once, then I feel I have accomplished what I am called to do...- - pFF

Sunshine
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9 posted 12-16-1999 03:51 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

One of your better pieces, DE, thank you!
wayoutwalt
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10 posted 12-16-1999 05:53 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

very nice dream another winner yuh
Poet deVine
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11 posted 12-16-1999 07:06 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Delight for the eyes, the heart and the soul! Your latest poems are wonderful, Scott!  
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12 posted 12-16-1999 07:09 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

What a lovely tribute, DreamEvivl! I enjoyed reading it as I am sure your Lady did.

 Nail to the mast her holy flag,
Set every threadbare sail-
And give her to the god of storms,
The lightning and the gale!
-Oliver Wendell Holmes

DreamEvil
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13 posted 12-17-1999 04:08 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I need to write a whole lot more sonnets to catch up to Willie, but I am working on it.  
Michael
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14 posted 12-17-1999 02:35 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Eloquent, my friend.  Had me thinking of Genny the whole way through.  Beautiful.

Michael
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15 posted 12-18-1999 03:22 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

"She lifts me up when my conscience weighs."
Love and long for this my friend!
Ominous
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16 posted 12-24-1999 03:58 AM       View Profile for Ominous   Email Ominous   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ominous

It is a truly beautiful poem Dream.
It is nice to see your romantic side come out.

 Mysterious is the shadow, walking down the path of light

TomS
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17 posted 12-24-1999 06:59 AM       View Profile for TomS   Email TomS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TomS

You are a lucky man.
Beki
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18 posted 12-24-1999 07:00 AM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

This is absolutely beautiful, Scott....this is one of your very best.   I especially liked "Her words soothe both my Beast and inner child."
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