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JamesMichael
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0 posted 1999-12-15 04:48 PM


Love For Me

She cares for me...she's always there for me and she's Love for me.
She is concerned and emotionally available...
She will share her heart with me and she will soften her heart so eagerly.
She was what I wanted and desired and what I deserve.
Now I'm living in a great big beautiful world.
I knew she would respond to my love starved heart and now my heart is filled with happiness.
When she rings me on the phone I rush to answer and hear her lovely voice.
We share special dinners together to talk and laugh, to touch and share and a chance to show how much we care, and to feel the pleasure that penetrates the air.
We see wonderful romantic movies together, and in anticipation, when they embrace we embrace.
Also we laugh with them and cry with them, we share the Love they feel.
We will share all of life's adventures together as we explore the world thru these eyes of love.
Spending many happy hours together talking and enjoying each others company.
Talking about anything at all, sharing and caring, love and concern, I'm thinking I want to be with you forever.
Where did these thoughts come from...I believe they were always there.
Waiting in anticipation for the one who would care.
I knew she would be there for me and I'm going to be there for her.
We will be friends, we will be companions, I want to be your lover.
I value the moments when we embrace, put your lips on mine and lets see what we discover.
My touch is soft and I wait for you to feel it.
I desire your softness and adore your willingness to respond so readily.
I'm ready to give my love without reservation, to share and care passionately, my love will not be passive as it reaches out to you actively.
Who is she...can you tell me...who will be love for me?


© Copyright 1999 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
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1 posted 1999-12-15 09:31 PM


You know, I think this was beautifully written!  It was soooo full of warm emotion, I just wanted to keep reading!  Very gentle and sweet.  I too, dream of sharing all the things you mentioned here with that special someone....You said it exquisitely!  Thank you for making me feel all warm and fuzzy inside!     I enjoyed it much, and what a lucky person, to receive the love you are wanting to give!  WOW

 - - - If I can just touch you once, then I feel I have accomplished what I am called to do...- - pFF


JamesMichael
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2 posted 1999-12-20 04:52 AM


Thank you Femme Fatale for reading and the beautiful response.  I am expressing my fantasy, my dreams, my hopes, and someday soon a reality...if I have anything to say about it (laugh) I wrote this with two women in my mind and I believe there is hope for one of them.    James
RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
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3 posted 1999-12-21 06:21 PM


Oh, this is so lovely...that one should voice all the best that life has to offer...but which one and did she say yes, I want to know?... I hope you didn't say there was a choice of two though..*g*

HUGS

 Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...



JamesMichael
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4 posted 1999-12-22 05:55 AM


Thank you Rainbow for your concern.  Unfortunatly for me this is still a fantasy.  I met Caryn and I had given her a copy of an old poem that I had written in 1995 titled "The Fright/She's Not There" and it could be described as a sad poem.  So she challenged me to write a happy poem.  At that time I hadn't written any new poems or prose since 1995 so I took her challenge and I wrote my first version of "Love For Me" on August 1999 and I gave her a copy and also one other woman I had met at that time.  But nothing was going on with either, I was only presenting myself as someone that was interested in a possible relationship.  Later, I found out that Charla (the other woman) was totally into dancing and partying and I'm not, so even though I was fascinated with her she moved way down on my list.  Also, I don't believe I ever rated on hers.  I found out that me and Caryn both agree that dancing is a minor pleasure in our lives and also we both enjoy hiking, art, and writing.  So I want to move her to number one on my list but she is moving very slowly.  I believe she likes me but I'm not sure.   I gave her the new version of "Love For Me" printed from this site yesterday along with her Christmas card.  So, I meant that there is hope for me that I have a chance with Caryn.  Also me and Caryn are almost exactly the same age and I want that right now.   Charla is still looking for that dance partner.   I'm still waiting for that hike up Diamond Head that Caryn promised me.  She is in my heart and I hope I am in hers.   Sorry I wrote so much for what could have been a short answer. James

[This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 12-22-1999).]

Travis
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since 1999-06-14
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5 posted 1999-12-22 06:04 AM


Don't we all dream of a love such as you describe.....If only it was easy to find.  Wonderful poem!  Travis
littleJas
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since 1999-12-22
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Australia
6 posted 1999-12-22 08:33 AM


I really felt the warmth in your poem , it is a beautiful love that you talk about, when you find this love you long for keep it forever safe inside your heart and soul
Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
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Pennsylvania
7 posted 1999-12-22 08:44 AM


Fortunate is the one who loves you
To have so tender a man to cling to
This is beautiful!
Take it from one who knows
Liz

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 1999-12-24 05:13 AM


Thank you Travis and yes I agree with you. I'd even settle for if only it was easier to find.  Thank you littleJas for your wonderful comments and believe me when I find that special one and they return my love I will be in heaven.  I've been thinking of an old song with the words "Its not for me to say, you Love me."  How true it is that each of us controls only our own heart and feelings and our willingness to respond.  We take action after our inner thoughts and desires make a choice.  Thank you Liz I love your soft heart and your message of hope.   James
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