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Toerag
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Ala bam a

0 posted 1999-12-15 04:28 PM


I think this may be the first poem I posted at this lovely site...not sure?....But, it's what I'm doing right at the moment......

In writing this poem I'm feeling depleted,
Hoping and praying it's not soon deleted.
It doesn't concern sex or passion or hate,
Just making words rhyme as I try to relate.

It has little meaning, just a word here and there,
No thoughts or real meaning that I'm trying to share
Just some "BS" and words that may rhyme,
Just kinda writin' and wasting my time.

I guess I could say I'm doing 'something'
But in reality I'm writin' 'bout nothing,
But my paragraphs show it's written in verse,
If I put my mind to it, it'd probably be worse.

P.S.
Today Suthern and I shared a beer,
She's such a sweet lady and dear,
But now it's back to my boring type living,
That's why I'm sitting here only thumb twiddling!



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Marilyn
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1 posted 1999-12-15 04:50 PM


Welcome to Passions first time poster....
I for one have missed you much. I am glad that you had this thumb twiddlin time. It gave you a chance to come visit us again.

Poet deVine
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2 posted 1999-12-15 04:50 PM


Like yours, my thumbs are twiddling
have been since dawn
work is slow, so here I am
stifling a yawn

If you could only call me
we'd giggle on the phone
but here I sit in my cubicle
bored and all alone.

No one's here to share a beer with
and since I don't really drink
I'll just sit back and try
to catch a snooze I think.

Cute one Toe!

Balladeer
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3 posted 1999-12-15 05:53 PM


Writing about nothing and with little meaning? So what's new? ROFL
RainbowGirl
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4 posted 1999-12-15 06:35 PM


Yes but Toe, some people write about nothing and mean so much more, others write only about BS, glad you're in the former category.. ))

HUSG

PS: Missed you

 Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...



Sally S.
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since 1999-06-07
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5 posted 1999-12-15 06:40 PM


Thumb twiddlin', eh?  Well, I suppose it could be worse!    I love your humor.

P.S.
It's about @$&% time! hehehe

Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 1999-12-15 06:55 PM


I'd hardly call your life boring. That word doesn't fit the character. Very colorful, I'd say, and lots of fun.
Liz

Martie
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7 posted 1999-12-15 07:20 PM


I'm just wondering
how you do it,
twiddle those thumbs
and type at once?
There must be
a trick to it.

Glad to see you posting Toe

 In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)

Denise
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8 posted 1999-12-15 07:26 PM


Well, I'm glad you're still around here Toe! You can write about anything as well as nothing...as long as you stay put here where you belong! Delightful poem, Toe!  

 Denise



JTF
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9 posted 1999-12-16 04:32 AM


Yo Toe !! ... Nice BS brudder ...  
Toerag
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Ala bam a
10 posted 1999-12-16 07:37 AM


Balladeer.....yanno?..Surely there's a spray or something for you?...Trap? Pellets? There's gotta be something.....I know there has to be!
poetFemmeFatale
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11 posted 1999-12-16 09:27 AM


I have a bottle of deer urine we can spray on him!  ROFL  It's great !  Works wonders if you're hunting!     He'll have all the "girls" flocking to him - - um....2nd thought, come here 'Toe...maybe I should spray some on you too!  ROFLMAO  Oh gees, it's too early in the morning for me to be here!  Argh!  Here I sit in my jammies, and talking deer urine!  Sorry - just what you said 'Toe, made me think of it....'Deer, you can borrow my antlers to rattle too, if you're REALLY hurting for some attention!  hehehe  Are you guys hunters, do you have any idea what I'm babbling about?  hehehehe  I am the huntress, ya know!  I'll shut up now....Keep twiddling Toe, you're good at it !!

 - - - If I can just touch you once, then I feel I have accomplished what I am called to do...- - pFF


Iloveit
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12 posted 1999-12-16 09:32 AM


love your nuthin's you do it better than anyone I know  

good to see you back....and good going for you and that lady that I love so much  

suthern
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13 posted 1999-12-16 10:56 AM


Awwww... you sweet thumb twiddler! *G* I'm glad you stayed so well occupied while I was driving back with a grin on my face and a song in my heart (which came right on out of my mouth... LOL... but I had my windows up so my caterwauling didn't bother anyone. *G*)

Thank you, sweet Toe, for a delightful morning... and a poem that put that smile right back on this mug of mine! *G*

Nan
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14 posted 1999-12-16 07:52 PM


...Yeah - but - how do you twiddle your thumbs, wink, wriggle yer ear, and twiddle yer toes all at the same time???......


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