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Little Girl Days Are Gone Now

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Lucie
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0 posted 12-15-1999 12:04 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lucie

Little girl days are gone.
Its time to take control.
Finally get your life straight.
Move forward to your goal.

You let life get to you
you bowed down to your pain.
Donít just lay there crying
get on your feet again.

Show them that your stronger
then they believe you are.
Stand up to your fears girl
stop wishing on a star.

You can make your own way
donít count on others now.
You know that you can make it
you'll survive somehow.

Youíll feel so much prouder
if you do it on your own.
Little girl days are gone now.
Your a woman now, your grown.



 With perseverance even the snail reached the Ark.
© Copyright 1999 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
UNLOVED-1
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1 posted 12-15-1999 12:11 PM       View Profile for UNLOVED-1   Email UNLOVED-1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for UNLOVED-1

it was really a nice poem. i noticed that you expressed your feelings that you have growned up and your poem is the proof of it.

 otis omar
Pepper
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2 posted 12-15-1999 12:35 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Love the sentiments in this piece....
I've filed this in my favorites to read and read again....Love this Lucie  

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


Dolphins3
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3 posted 12-15-1999 03:37 PM       View Profile for Dolphins3   Email Dolphins3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dolphins3

Great poem Lucie. I enjoyed it very much.
Merry Christmas.  
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4 posted 12-15-1999 04:03 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Well, you said it so now you gotta do it. Good to see you. Lucie.
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5 posted 12-15-1999 04:30 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Go for it!

You've come far, now finish the journey!!  Wonderful poem. . .

Definitely a keeper!

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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6 posted 12-15-1999 08:44 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

You said it girl!  I am so glad to see you rise above your struggles!  I hate to see "frustrations" get the best of fabulous people like yourself!  You have made me proud, by rising above, and being strong and patient in the roughest of times!  And I'll say it again, I am soooo glad to see you back here, writing, which is where you belong!  

 - - - If I can just touch you once, then I feel I have accomplished what I am called to do...- - pFF

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