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Fermented juices and toxic wine

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 12-15-1999 11:46 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin


Fermented juices and toxic wine

Kindled questions scourge my night,
Lighting areas I would not light.
Fermenting juices of my brain.
With toxic wines of potent strain.

And in the glasses medleys warm,
Lit with silver of ghostly form.
Erotica in as bold a toast,
As any I could boast or host.

I know not why these demons lie.
It's not my wakeful nature, not I.
But desires seem to crash in waves
And make my mind go into raves.

What curse is this that steals my peace?
What answer there, could give release?
I'd gladly lay my amour down,
Even if I would a clown.

So in dilemma, here I lie
And wrestle with my devils Why?
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 12-15-1999 11:51 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Sy,
Your verse is beautiful as usual
Exquisite words and lyric fine
I have but one request to make
Can I have a little of that wine?
Sounds great!
Liz
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 12-15-1999 11:56 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Elizabeth,
For pity sake, for pity sake,
Take all that you can take.
Loved your response,
Love you. Sy
Pepper
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3 posted 12-15-1999 12:14 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Sy....(sigh).....

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


Mike
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4 posted 12-15-1999 12:36 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Well done...  enjoyed.
Nate Dogg
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5 posted 12-15-1999 12:48 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Another great poem from Seymour! It's like routine for you. You never ceases to amaze me. I hope I don't offend anybody but you are the best poet on this board. Your imagery and the way you use and compose your words is unlike any other I've seen on this board. In fact your syle kind of reminds me of Robert Frost. Once again, great poem and I hope you keep it up!
Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 12-15-1999 01:03 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

I'll second that!
Liz
Severn
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7 posted 12-15-1999 02:36 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Sy, another beauty - slightly confounding on first read, but I suspect you wouldn't have it any other way - so I'm off to read it again!

K
Martie
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8 posted 12-15-1999 03:07 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Great poem as usual Sy.  What kind of wine did you say that was? The nightly devil's brew, made just for you.

 In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)
Balladeer
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9 posted 12-15-1999 03:19 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Excellent poem, Seymour Frost.
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 12-15-1999 05:55 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Pepper,
Sigh right back, Thank you. *L*
Mike,
Big thanks.
Nate,
You haven't read Balladeer,Nan,Michael or poetdeVine. The only thing Of Frost about me is my nose. But a big thanks to you.
Severn,
What ever is between the lines I know you will find. *L*
Matrie,
It's private stock. *L*
Balladeer,
You are a master of quips and the only thing
of Frost about me, as I said bebore is my nose, sometimes.
Sally S.
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11 posted 12-15-1999 06:50 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

So open up and find release!
The drink you choose won't bring you peace.
Suspecting with your armor down,
Not one would find you act a clown.



Denise
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12 posted 12-15-1999 07:23 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Seymour, I agree...Mr. Frost has nothing over you! Excellent, as usual!  

 Denise


Marge Tindal
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13 posted 12-15-1999 07:47 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Quite a poem, Seymour ...

What a fine kettle of fish
that would be ...
Seymour snockered
on a little Chablis`

Seymour the ~Frosty~ poet
had a very shiny nose.
And if you ever saw it
you would even say it glows!

After a bottle
of good Red Wine ...
dancing on the rooftop
would be fine.

Seymour the ~Frosty~ poet,
Passion's friends all agree.
He's just the sort
to 'pop a cork' ...
and with friends of his
to consort !

The questions of
the devils sot ...
is not why ...
but WHY NOT ?


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 12-16-1999 12:03 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Sally,
Loved your little poem and your right. *L*
Denise,
Thank you Denice you are the sweetest of sweet. *L*
Marge,
Your poem sais much
And I would enclose,
A shot of schnapps,
Is good for the nose.
*L* Sy
hoot_owl_rn
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15 posted 12-16-1999 01:06 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Given the choice
'Tween words or wine
I'll chose your words
They are so fine
And drunken on
Your poetry
Stronger than wine
I'd rather be
The bite is milder
And in the 'morn
I won't be wishing
I was never born

Seymore, I can get drunk on your words and not have to nurse a hangover in the morning  
Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 12-16-1999 05:45 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Hoot,
Your poen is so sweet in spin,
I think I need some insulin.
*L* Sy
 
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