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Could There Be?

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UNLOVED-1
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0 posted 12-15-1999 10:28 AM       View Profile for UNLOVED-1   Email UNLOVED-1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for UNLOVED-1

                 "Could There Be?"


   Could there be a day without a night?
   Could there be wrong without right?
   Could there be stars without a sky?
   Could there be truth without a lie?
   Could there be a garden without a flower?
   Could there be sweet without sour?
   Could there be love without a heart?
   Could there be love being apart?
   Could there be you without me?
   Is it like shakespear said to be or not to be?
   I don't know if that is true.
   But there couldn't be me without you.


                                  Otis Omar


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© Copyright 1999 Otis Omar Aracena Jon - All Rights Reserved
Marilyn
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1 posted 12-15-1999 10:34 AM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Welcome to Passions. This is a beautiful piece. The one this is written for is lucky to have you. I hope to see more of you.  
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 12-15-1999 10:41 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Unloved,
Welcome and I enjoyed the read.
Ayla
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3 posted 12-15-1999 10:43 AM       View Profile for Ayla   Email Ayla   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ayla

This is a lovely poem. : )

 Yesterday is history.Tomorrow is a mystery.Today is a Gift.That's why we call it The Present. - The Millennium Bug

WhtDove
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4 posted 12-15-1999 11:01 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

WELCOME!  I really liked this! Lots of questions and that's good, I hope you get the answers that make a happy heart!

 <*\\\><
Jesus is the reason for the season

Poet deVine
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5 posted 12-15-1999 01:33 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family! I liked this a lot. If I can ever be of assistance, please let me know!  
Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 12-15-1999 01:43 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

If you love someone, it's hard to be without them
Nicely Done!
Welcome!
LIz
Pepper
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Welcome to Passions Unloved  
I enjoyed your piece..

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
  



[This message has been edited by Pepper (edited 12-15-1999).]
Sven
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8 posted 12-15-1999 04:25 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Welcome my friend. . .

This is very good. . . from the heart. . . that's where the best words come from. . . look forward to reading more of your work!

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Severn
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9 posted 12-15-1999 05:15 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Welcome, welcome, welcome.

Nice entry.

      
UNLOVED-1
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10 posted 12-15-1999 05:50 PM       View Profile for UNLOVED-1   Email UNLOVED-1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for UNLOVED-1

thank you all for welcoming me into your family. i really feel that i am one of you thanks to your nice recievement. all i can say is that in each and everyone of my poems i write what i feel from the bottom of my heart. THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!!

 otis omar
Sally S.
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11 posted 12-15-1999 07:03 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Welcome to Passions, Otis.  Pull up a computer chair and relax.  
Nice enterance by the way.   Very heartfelt poem.
Denise
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This is sweet! Welcome to Passions!

 Denise


 
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