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reflections on my individual test (freeverse)

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seesage
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0 posted 12-15-1999 12:50 AM       View Profile for seesage   Email seesage   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for seesage

My thoughts were decisive and clear when not in trouble
but complications always confused my rational
temtations were my downfall
only if i would of saw that which i proably did see but not so evident
which i do see now
will i lose again like i always do
**** no is what i scream in my state after my mistake
but
so far
its always happened again
the temptation
the clouding of my actions  
my one downfall
my one weakness and flaw
so simple is seems to overcome afterwards
why is it this simplicity couldn't be as simple as it is now
tommorow of later I guess I'll see when the trials start all over again.


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I like your final couplet, seesage.... and welcome to our Passionate family....
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Echoing the welcome...

  
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Welcome. . .

Good words. . . strong and deep. . .

Looking forward to seeing more. . .

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--Victor Frankl


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