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Her Voice

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Sven
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0 posted 12-14-1999 03:08 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sven

Like the sound of an angel of the highest order
Her voice speaks to me in my dreams
From beyond the night, crossing that border
Where once there were only screams.

She speaks of a love not yet known
A love that she and I will share
But until that day where she will be my own
This distance is more than I can bear.

Oh angel of my heart speak to me again
Calm my heart and quench my fears
Your voice says that you will come. . . when?
For all I can see now are tears.

"I will come to you soon my love, so dry your eyes.
We will be together, soon we will be one
Our hearts are bound together, our love is the tie
And on that day, I will not leave you when comes
   the rising sun."

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


© Copyright 1999 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 12-14-1999 03:18 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Sven,
How do you do it? It's so difficult for me to write a verse with 4 rhyming phrases and you did it htroughout the poem. Perhaps all of your poems are such, but I never noticed because I was more interested in the content.
Your lady friend will like this one, It is very romantic.
Liz
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2 posted 12-14-1999 04:21 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Very nice indeed, love the last line particularly.

[This message has been edited by Severn (edited 12-14-1999).]
Isis
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3 posted 12-14-1999 07:17 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Aah my friend, you did it again!!  
So beautiful *sigh*  

 What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 12-14-1999 07:25 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Sven -
This is really very pretty.
Nice job, indeed !
~*Marge*~


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Sven
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5 posted 12-15-1999 04:37 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Thank you all so much. . .

Elizabeth, I really don't know how I get the lines to rhyme, it just comes to me. . .

Thank you Isis. . .

Severn and Marge, glad that you enjoyed it. . .

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Sally S.
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6 posted 12-15-1999 09:18 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

This is so beautiful.  Believe me, she will adore your words.  
 
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