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He Ain't Heavy
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He Ain't Heavy |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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He Ain't Heavy ~Marge Tindal~ 1999  How could I not offer to carry the woes of a friend, when under the strain of burden he may surely bend? He may bend, but he will not break, as long as I am there, to pick up his load and carry it, showing him how much I care. Weary brother let me help you. I tell you it is no trouble. For if it lightens your burden, I'd be glad to carry double. And when the time comes for me to need your care, come and help me, brother, with the burdens I must also bear. Together we make a really strong team, togetherness is what it's about. 'He ain't heavy ... he's my brother' of that there is no doubt. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Theraaven Junior Member
since 1999-12-11
Posts 11 |
This is wonderful!!! It speaks so well of you...All should be blessed with such friends |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
That's what friends are for! Love it, Marge! Denise |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Marge - As I read more and more of your poetry I see what a wonderful and giving person you are. Anyone would be lucky to have a friend like you. Very nice poem. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge, This is beautiful It is so YOU! It speaks for itself Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TheRaaven - It's so easy to laugh and love with friends when things are rosy ... a real testament to who we are when we can help shoulder their load. Thank you, Raaven. Denise - Yep, that's what friends are for. Thank you for finding it to your liking. Eloise - Thank you for getting to know me through my poetry. I am what I write. Step on over to the LUCKY line ... for I feel you are a friend of mine. Elizabeth, my friend - Your opinions always matter to me. Thanks for your kindness. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...and that's what life is really all about.. Nice job, Marge...  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan - Thank you. It is what life is supposed to be about. Many friends have helped to tote my load. I'm sure it's what God meant when He said he'd never give us more than we could carry. He gives us the shoulders of friends and in return ... we get to help shoulder their loads. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
A Wonderful poem from a most Beautiful heart.... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Marge you are such a true delight! Good caring hearts are hard to find (except at Passions, of course!) You're a gem It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Those four hearts are pumping again, dear friend. Excellent... K |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Pepper - Thanks ... right back atcha'. Caroline - Good hearts are easily found ... look inside and you will see one. Passion's friends are abundant with hearts. Thank you for your kind thoughts. Severn - You, my little friend, are in my heart for sure. God bless you. in my ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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