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Cuddlez
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0 posted 12-13-1999 05:35 PM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Cuddlez

What do you want?

You say you want to be just friends.
Yet you constantly reach for my hand.
Expecting a kiss, you pull me tight.
Then when I turn away, you say
We never said we still wouldn't kiss
And hold each other tight.
I want to say no, this isn't right
But that isn't exactly how I feel.
I want to kiss you and hold you
Knowing this, you push and I give in
Enjoying the kiss but hating the implications
But the just friend thing keeps coming up
Who's to say we aren't just friends...
We are just friends in public
But I'm supposed to just jump at your demands
While I want a definite label, girlfriend, friend or lover
Whatever it may be
Yet You seem content to take exactly what you do
While I take what I can get.
But I'm afraid to ask
What do you want?
Who do you want me to be?
Am I a friend, a lover or a combination of the three
I'm afraid of knowing the answer
But know it I must,
so today I'll ask
What exactly do you want??


 Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.




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Nan
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1 posted 12-13-1999 08:17 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Sounds to me like a question that deserves a little exploration..... ya think?..
femtastic
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2 posted 12-14-1999 12:28 AM       View Profile for femtastic   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for femtastic

I actually like this poem! Good work
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3 posted 12-14-1999 08:31 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

You definitely deserve answers. *S* I hope the one you get is the one you want!
Cuddlez
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4 posted 12-14-1999 10:34 PM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

I hope I get answers too. Any one have any suggestions on how I should go about asking... Im tempted to show him this poem but.......

 Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.
sraet
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5 posted 12-14-1999 11:41 PM       View Profile for sraet   Email sraet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sraet

Another impossible relationship....
Ahat holds you back from showing him the poem? I think it relates your feelings well.
I hope all goes well for you and you get what you want, or better yet, what you deserve.
Cuddlez
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6 posted 12-16-1999 01:09 AM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

I dont want him to know all of this right away. I dont know if it is an impossible relationship or not... I hope not, but casara sara.....

 Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.
Beri
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7 posted 12-16-1999 04:41 PM       View Profile for Beri   Email Beri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beri

Yes my dear Cuddlez, Que sera sera, whatever will be will be.  --Sigh--  But don't you wish you could make it be how you want it?  I am sure, but give it time, you deserve the answers from him, thats for sure!

 If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be...
Cuddlez
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8 posted 12-16-1999 05:01 PM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

so thats how you spell it... que sera sera, i always wondered )
ill get the answers somehow or the other, its just taking  hell of a lot more time than I thought it would. First, it was supposed to be monday I got a call, its thursday and no call (. But, Im having fun doing other stuff. My life isnt on hold for the call from him... Ive got some better things to do ) thanks everyone for your replies

 Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.
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9 posted 12-18-1999 01:49 AM       View Profile for femtastic   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for femtastic

Hows it going babe? Hope its ok.
 
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