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suthern
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on the threshold of a dream


0 posted 12-13-1999 12:41 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for suthern

Iím shocked, appalled. Youíre ashamed of me!
That unwanted knowledge makes me bleed,
Peels away my skin, sears screaming nerves.
Iím desolate, wishing I had worth.
So much for my dreams - thereís nothing left.
Iím here alone - bewildered, bereft.
© Copyright 1999 suthern - All Rights Reserved
RainbowGirl
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1 posted 12-13-1999 01:25 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

HUSG


 Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...


Iloveit
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2 posted 12-13-1999 01:44 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

gosh suthern, your words are so powerful, can actually "feel" them......"that unwanted knowledge"......whew.....and nope *shakes her head* you are wonderful......am with rainbow on this one.......big big hugs
suthern
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3 posted 12-13-1999 02:01 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Thank you, dear friends!  (I'm gonna need some powerful running shoes if You Know Who peeks in here to find today's melancholy mopings... or I'll be feeling his wrath! *G*)

JTF
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4 posted 12-13-1999 02:38 PM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

WOW !! Striking stuff Auntie !! ... and you know what, *they* should be ashamed of themselves ... and they're not worth it ... a French smooch for a great lady ...  
Toerag
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5 posted 12-13-1999 02:43 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Who doesn't realize what? What realization? what does this imply? Who what where?....You'll realize something soon if ya don't answer the damn emails!!! And JTF...nobody's worth it for sure my old friend that doesn't write anymore....LOL
Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 12-13-1999 02:45 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Rejection is the greatest pain one can endure, but it doesn't diminish your worth in the least.
Liz
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7 posted 12-13-1999 02:47 PM       View Profile for JOY 14   Email JOY 14   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JOY 14's Home Page   View IP for JOY 14

What is left if someone you thought was close is ashamed of you?

 JOY

suthern
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8 posted 12-13-1999 03:04 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Oooops... *G* Toe, you were supposed to be busy today so I could sneak in some of my "I feel sorry for me" poems! LOL I have them in great quantities!

Thank you JTF, Elizabeth, and Joy!

And Toe... emails are answered... SMOOCH!
Echo Rhayne
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9 posted 12-13-1999 09:25 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

I 'echo' the hugs!

 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


WhtDove
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10 posted 12-14-1999 12:16 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Hmmn, that you know who must have been...ah, um, could it be Toe? hehe

Suthern are you feeling like this today?
Who ever tells you those things don't listen to em. I for one know you to be a wonderful person! I am not ashamed of you!  
~HUGS~

†<*\\\><    
Jesus is the reason for the season



[This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 12-14-1999).]
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11 posted 12-14-1999 12:23 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Ouch! This is loaded with pain! Don't worry, Suthern, we all love ya! To heck with them!  

 Denise


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12 posted 12-14-1999 12:53 AM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

What is left if someone
Close to you bemoans
Your worth and value,
In their eyes alone.
Dont pay attention, dear one
For you'll change if you need to
Kindly ask them exactly why
and then listen of tell them to GO TO HELL
Nan
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13 posted 12-14-1999 07:44 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

GEESH!!!!


Here's a hug
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14 posted 12-14-1999 07:57 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

You're worth lots to us! Anyone who says different might have to fight over it...I'm not so far from Louisiana, ya know! I'd just have to come over there and show 'em who is worthless!  

(((((HUGS)))))  

You say a lot in a few words, Suthern.


 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain


suthern
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15 posted 12-14-1999 08:00 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Thank you all for the caring and hugs... and special thanks to Cuddlez for the wonderful poem and Nan for the bear hugs. *G* You don't know how much all of you mean to me or how much I appreciate you!

But to answer WhtDove... no, that's not how I feel today. I won't deny they're my feelings or that such realization hurt like hell so that even the memory brings tears... they're just not my present feelings. *S* I have poems and pieces of poems from times when writing helped me hold onto my sanity (limited as the supply was *G*) And most times, I don't post such poems because I don't want anyone thinking they're about that finest man who ever lived Toerag... and because he doesn't like my gloomy poems and I strive to please! *G*

But sometimes... they clamor for their turn. Thank you all very much for being so kind to my poem... and even more for the kindness and friendship you've given me. And caroline... I may take you up on that offer! *G*


[This message has been edited by suthern (edited 12-14-1999).]
Iloveit
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ROFG@limited as the supply was....

ok, just had to get that out of the way, and yep, really appreciate your comments suthern, sometimes poems are current and sometimes not, but the pain still comes through and hugs are always nice....

big hugs and smiles for your day
hoot_owl_rn
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17 posted 12-14-1999 10:19 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Big Hugs my friend........I feel your pain.
Pepper
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18 posted 12-14-1999 03:53 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

I'm glad to hear you are not feeling
this way now suthern....but I'm sorry
that you ever had to deal with that
painful situation  
sending more Hugs....
Seymour Tabin
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19 posted 12-14-1999 04:02 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Suthern,
Like the song goes,
"I can't give you anything but *L* baby.
 
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