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Pine Forest Paradise

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Lost Dreamer
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0 posted 12-13-1999 11:35 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Pine Forest Paradise

Went away to a pine forest paradise
rich with chirping birds,
and hooting owls.
The sounds of nature
to echo in my mind
as I rest my head to sleep.
I awaken to the sounds of nature
all harmonious together.
Walking through the forest
I see chipmunks scurrying to hide
behind the fallen pine trees.
Must have rained here
mucky mud under my feet.
Path splits which way to go?
Followed the way of the owl
perched on the branch of
a mighty oak.
Stream of water bouncing
off a rock cliff
splashing in the river below.
Getting warmer now
horsefly buzzing round my head.
Wandering down to the river
to watch some tubers floating by.
Walking beside the river now
letting the water cover my feet.
Feeling serene
like I never want to leave.
Sunset just around the corner
been here since the time it rose.
12 hours spent
in a pine forest paradise.

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1 posted 12-13-1999 11:57 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Delightful imagery Lost Dreamer  
I really enjoyed this read.....
Pretty poem.....

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Echo Rhayne
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2 posted 12-13-1999 08:59 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Well, dangit, where was I, I want to go there too hehe, sounded great!  Great imagery!


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Michael
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3 posted 12-13-1999 09:03 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Oh, wow. I could sure use 12 hours away...or twelve days...LOL  I love nature, the mountains, the forest.  I can imagine how it smelled there in your paradise.  Must've been wonderful.

Michael
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