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Pine Forest Paradise |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Pine Forest Paradise Went away to a pine forest paradise rich with chirping birds, and hooting owls. The sounds of nature to echo in my mind as I rest my head to sleep. I awaken to the sounds of nature all harmonious together. Walking through the forest I see chipmunks scurrying to hide behind the fallen pine trees. Must have rained here mucky mud under my feet. Path splits which way to go? Followed the way of the owl perched on the branch of a mighty oak. Stream of water bouncing off a rock cliff splashing in the river below. Getting warmer now horsefly buzzing round my head. Wandering down to the river to watch some tubers floating by. Walking beside the river now letting the water cover my feet. Feeling serene like I never want to leave. Sunset just around the corner been here since the time it rose. 12 hours spent in a pine forest paradise. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Delightful imagery Lost Dreamer  I really enjoyed this read..... Pretty poem..... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Well, dangit, where was I, I want to go there too hehe, sounded great! Great imagery! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Oh, wow. I could sure use 12 hours away...or twelve days...LOL I love nature, the mountains, the forest. I can imagine how it smelled there in your paradise. Must've been wonderful. Michael |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Please take me too |
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