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Another Romantic Rambling

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DreamEvil
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0 posted 12-13-1999 05:30 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Lunatic
that is what I am
moon-drunk
on Dionysus
heady brew
flowing through my veins
pounding my heart
with unknown vigor
that feeds
sweet Aphrodite's
gracious gift:
true love

My Lady is beyond compare
for comparison
would be unjust
as it would serve
but to show
as glaring flaws
the imperfection
in those at her side
for to mine own eye
her beauty far outshines
any rival sun
for she is the brightest of stars
in my night

To think her eyes
those twins suns
blazing with vital life
might dim with pain
is more than my hold
upon control to bear
for Honor,
Duty,
Chivalry
all demand from me
obeisance
but to mine own heart
will I be true
and thus do I choose
the comfort
of my Lady
over mine own
tarnished nature

Words I say
are insufficient
to the task
lack they
the depth of feeling
and resolve
the voice conveys,
oh the symphonies that play
upon her golden tongue
reach mine ears
and fair swoon me
with tantalizing images
of her by firelight
as our lips
touch in a kiss


©1999 DreamEvil



 Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©
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"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade
(Marquis de Sade)

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Severn
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1 posted 12-13-1999 05:40 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Surprise surprise 'tis I!
Delicate, yet shows the hidden darkness, dark one.
Your words are beautiful under that half-light.

K
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 12-13-1999 06:13 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Ramble on romantic lunatic !
If this is rambling ... take us further.
Really like it, DreamEvil.
~*Marge*~


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RainbowGirl
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3 posted 12-13-1999 06:20 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Dream: I really do love this romantic side of you..

HUGS

 Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...


hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 12-13-1999 09:46 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Oh you do do romance well Scott   I like this and it likes me very well  
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 12-13-1999 09:59 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

DE,
You must be part Irish?
This comes under the heading
Of pure blarney, but you did
a great job.
DreamEvil
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6 posted 12-13-1999 06:19 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Thank you for the replies.
Iloveit
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7 posted 12-13-1999 06:23 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

ah.....this is beautiful, would that someone would love me like this and write love poems.....she is lucky ....so are you  
caroline
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8 posted 12-13-1999 07:15 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Of all of your poetry that I love...this will definitely be in the list of my very favorite ones, Dream. It is wonderful, my dear.  

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain


Poet deVine
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9 posted 12-13-1999 11:46 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Lovely! Your style is definitely changing.. I like this very much!  
Christopher
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10 posted 12-14-1999 02:46 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Brother, you never "ramble."
Pepper
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11 posted 12-14-1999 04:03 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Such a beautiful tribute to your love...I really enjoyed reading this DE....

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


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