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Echo Rhayne
Senior Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

0 posted 1999-12-13 03:05 AM

Gaze into my heart, to see how I feel.
Spare me some time, but don't send a bill.
Bestow me the power, to do what I can.
Step into my shoes, to know where I stand.

Present to me, a reason to live.
Take from me, all that I have to give.
Enlighten me, with all that you know.
Turn me lose, but don't let me go.

Touch me, but watch where you touch.
Want me, but not quite as much.
Need me, as I've needed you.
Capture my dreams, and make them come true.

Stay with me, when nobody's there.
Care for me, when no one else cares.
Cover me, when I need to hide.
Walk on me, but don't step on my pride.

Loathe me, but not much at all.
Catch me, if ever I fall.
Rescue me, when I need to be saved.
Carry me, but not to my grave.

~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

[This message has been edited by Echo Rhayne (edited 12-13-1999).]

First__Knight
Senior Member

since 1999-11-08

Posts 678

1 posted 1999-12-13 03:15 AM

This has great meaning and advice....I found it to be just the right things to be....to be learned. Almost like a Father teaching his son how to love his wife. Advice from the Father above

I like this a lot Echo.....Very very nice

Share what you are for you are what you share

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

2 posted 1999-12-13 03:19 AM

This my friend, is my favorite of all your works. It has quite a depth of feeling to it.

Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©
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"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade
(Marquis de Sade)

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 1999-12-13 03:59 AM

Deep meaning here Echo, I love it!

What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

4 posted 1999-12-13 05:45 PM

Thanks you all! I quite like this one too!

~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

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