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Echo Rhayne
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0 posted 12-13-1999 03:05 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Gaze into my heart, to see how I feel.
Spare me some time, but don't send a bill.
Bestow me the power, to do what I can.
Step into my shoes, to know where I stand.

Present to me, a reason to live.
Take from me, all that I have to give.
Enlighten me, with all that you know.
Turn me lose, but don't let me go.

Touch me, but watch where you touch.
Want me, but not quite as much.
Need me, as I've needed you.
Capture my dreams, and make them come true.

Stay with me, when nobody's there.
Care for me, when no one else cares.
Cover me, when I need to hide.
Walk on me, but don't step on my pride.

Loathe me, but not much at all.
Catch me, if ever I fall.
Rescue me, when I need to be saved.
Carry me, but not to my grave.


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns.  But a place of torment because the light of God is gone.  To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~




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First__Knight
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1 posted 12-13-1999 03:15 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

This has great meaning and advice....I found it to be just the right things to be....to be learned.  Almost like a Father teaching his son how to love his wife.  Advice from the Father above    I like this a lot Echo.....Very very nice

 Share what you are for you are what you share

DreamEvil
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2 posted 12-13-1999 03:19 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

This my friend, is my favorite of all your works. It has quite a depth of feeling to it.

 Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvilŠ
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because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

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Dark Angel
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3 posted 12-13-1999 03:59 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Deep meaning here Echo, I love it!

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Echo Rhayne
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4 posted 12-13-1999 05:45 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Thanks you all!  I quite like this one too!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


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