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MADDavid
Junior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 26
Carrollton, TX, USA

0 posted 1999-12-13 01:40 AM



Here I sit so sleepy and blue
Can't get to bed for reading of you
Help me to get that needed sleep
Don't you'll post another peep.

I'll be back tomorrow to see what's new
I am addicted to the reading like you.
No other thing can I get done
Til I read the last poem spun.

Help me Help me the next coming day
You'll have got to be still I pray.
Your poems are contagious just like a flu
I get a rush from reading all of you.

I really better quit and get into bed
I need visions of sugerplums dancing in my head
Goodnight to all and to all goodnight.
I'll be back tomorrow to have another bite.


 Shine a light and darkness disappears.

© Copyright 1999 Mayme David - All Rights Reserved
Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

1 posted 1999-12-13 02:01 AM


You have written me!!!!
LOL.

K

poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
2 posted 1999-12-13 02:31 AM


LOL  This is too funny!  I'm sitting here googly-eyed too, at almost 1:30 in the morning !!  Good thing I don't have to go to work !  LOL  I'm glad to see you writing !!  You're so funny !!  I bet dad's eyes are popping out too!  :I
Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

3 posted 1999-12-13 04:29 AM


Hey MADDavid, sounds like you're mad, mad about this place like I am hehe   I loved the poem.

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 1999-12-13 06:12 AM


We say family of friends, it's more like family of addicts isn't it?  No offence anyone! LOL
I loved the poem, describes me and many others!!  

 What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


RSEvans
Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA
5 posted 1999-12-13 07:11 AM


awww...shucks.  And you told me you couldn't write a thing that rhymed.  On a more serious note, I think you've tapped into why I'm sitting here in my underwear at 5:45 in the morning.  This place is truly addicting.  Kudos.

To those of you who do not know already...this is my Mom.  So now we have Femme, Femme's Father, Me, and my Mom; and you thought this place was already a family..we're the poetic Brady Bunch.  Now get some sleep.

Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
6 posted 1999-12-13 07:59 AM


ROTFL..... Ain' life grand, Mae???     
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
7 posted 1999-12-13 09:35 AM


LOL...been there, done that!!
Iloveit
Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121
NM
8 posted 1999-12-14 10:58 AM


lol this is great ...you wrote us all with this one, I have had my access limited lately and feel like I am having withdrawl symptoms, and that I am missing out on soooo much....

big hugs

and ..... *perk* RS is sitting in his underwear? lolol

caroline
Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218
http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm
9 posted 1999-12-14 11:43 AM


Mae, ya done good! Got us all pegged, don't you? *LOL*

Yo RS...Bud ya can't go around saying you're sittin' in your drawers! You'll have all the ladies here blushing! (but come on...do tell..boxers, briefs or longjohns?? hehehe  )


 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain



Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
10 posted 1999-12-14 12:55 PM


Great poem!  One of those addictions that I want to keep, is this place.< !signature-->

 In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)


[This message has been edited by Martie (edited 12-14-1999).]

RSEvans
Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA
11 posted 1999-12-14 03:28 PM


Iloveit/Caroline:  briefs and bikinis depending on my mood.  At that time of the morning I can't tell if I've even got them on to tell the truth.
Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
12 posted 1999-12-14 03:32 PM


This was ENJOYABLE! Loved it!
Liz

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