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Society sits in the dark
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Society sits in the dark |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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Inside these walls of fabrication society sits in the dark. Eternity for contemplation could not prevent a world so stark. We try to rise above ourselves and watch as we together fall. Then place the past upon our shelves and add a brick on to the wall. The two most waisted things in life are time and potential, I have both and not a clue what to do with them. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice, Kevin. You seem to be wise beyond your years! Denise |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Perhaps an eternity for comtemplation would do some good - for we'd be so busy thinking we wouldn't have a chance to cause any harm!! I like this, Kevin.  |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
very nice........and as you pile those bricks of stones.....Remember to leave room for a door....for a window if you might..For a time will come when you will set yourself free Share what you are for you are what you share |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Very nice Kevin. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Kevin...I second First Knight on this one. Walls sometimes not only keep others out, but also ourselves in. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Kevin, Our society has built too many walls. But that is changing as we address ourselves to the rest of the world. I am optomistic. You are one of the reasons. Liz |
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