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Djaj
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0 posted 12-12-1999 08:39 PM       View Profile for Djaj   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Djaj

(this is a poem for a girl who has stolen my heart...A heart that I really thought was totally dead.The peom is a little corny but I was also trying to make her laugh)


Dear Natalie sweet Natalie
With stars in her eyes
Is she really Miss Untouchable
Or is it just a disguise

A princess she is
With a loving heart so fair
A knockout smile
To match her long flowing hair

Taken me back
This girl of my dreams
She is an absolute wonder
Or so may it seem

For  she has stolen
What I thought was deceased
My longing heart
Has finally found pease

I thankyou for that
And for so much more
And one day Yes
Iíll carry you across that door

Yes Iím a dork
And slightly mis lead
Perhaps it has something
To do with my head

I bid you farewell
But never goodbye
For we shall be close
Till both of us die




 
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1 posted 12-12-1999 08:43 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions, Djaj! This is not corny, it its very sweet!

 Denise


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2 posted 12-12-1999 10:06 PM       View Profile for Beri   Email Beri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beri

Welcome to passions!!!!  And by the way, I thought this was so sweet also!!  Not corny...  I loved it.
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3 posted 12-12-1999 10:48 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family! This is not corny at all...I'm sure she loved it! It made me smile too!  
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4 posted 12-12-1999 11:06 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Well, no dork wrote this! Welcome.
Djaj
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5 posted 12-12-1999 11:20 PM       View Profile for Djaj   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Djaj

Thanks guys for your kind words...Nice to be on the team...

I just hope Natalie will appreciate this...

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6 posted 12-13-1999 12:49 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

WELCOME!!!  I thought this was very sweet, and I'm sure she'll love it, and have a big grin on her face!

 <*\\\><
Jesus is the reason for the season

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7 posted 12-13-1999 02:25 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Hardly a dork!
This is great - and she will more than appreciate I'm sure.
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8 posted 12-13-1999 05:37 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Djaj, this is so very sweet, I am sure she will love it. Well Done

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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Welcome to passions  
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10 posted 12-13-1999 09:52 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Djaj,
Welcome and I like corn.
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11 posted 12-14-1999 08:36 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

She'll love it!!! *G* Welcome!
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Keep them coming. We like poems about love.
Liz
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Such a sweet poem.. Welcome to Passions Djaj!!

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


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14 posted 12-14-1999 04:52 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Excellent!!  From the heart. . . that makes the best kind of poetry. . . continue to write like this and you will indeed win her heart. . . if you have not already. . .

You are beginning to find your voice, I hope that we can help you to do so. ..

Welcome, my friend. ..

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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