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Eboni
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0 posted 12-12-1999 08:20 PM       View Profile for Eboni   Email Eboni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eboni

You could be the one
The one I m waiting for
You could be the one
The one that I adore
You could be the one
The one I want to kiss
The one I want to hug
The one I ve always missed
You could be the one I need in my life
You might even be the one to ask me to be your wife
But now I ll never know if these things are true
And if you can remeber I ll always love you
I did the crime
Now I must do the time
I m just writing what I feel
I m not really trying to rhyme
You could be the one for me
Give it a little more time




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Denise
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1 posted 12-12-1999 08:33 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very nice!

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Seymour Tabin
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Eboni,
Enjoyed the read.
First__Knight
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What a lovely invite to love....Very well put and wrote  

 Share what you are for you are what you share

Beri
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4 posted 12-12-1999 10:27 PM       View Profile for Beri   Email Beri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beri

Oh!  How beautiful, I loved this!  Great job!
 
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