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Eboni
Junior Member
since 1999-12-11
Posts 17
Texas

0 posted 1999-12-12 08:20 PM


You could be the one
The one I m waiting for
You could be the one
The one that I adore
You could be the one
The one I want to kiss
The one I want to hug
The one I ve always missed
You could be the one I need in my life
You might even be the one to ask me to be your wife
But now I ll never know if these things are true
And if you can remeber I ll always love you
I did the crime
Now I must do the time
I m just writing what I feel
I m not really trying to rhyme
You could be the one for me
Give it a little more time




 Eboni Banks

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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-12-12 08:33 PM


Very nice!

 Denise



Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
2 posted 1999-12-12 09:23 PM


Eboni,
Enjoyed the read.

First__Knight
Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678

3 posted 1999-12-12 09:28 PM


What a lovely invite to love....Very well put and wrote  

 Share what you are for you are what you share


Beri
Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 149

4 posted 1999-12-12 10:27 PM


Oh!  How beautiful, I loved this!  Great job!
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