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The Wedding Album

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Denise
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0 posted 12-12-1999 06:15 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Denise

Preserved in time eternally
Pure unabashed expectancy
Those sacred vows sealed with a kiss
Bright smiling eyes that speak true bliss
Two loving hearts beat now as one
From this day on 'till life is done
Come dreams fulfilled or not to be
Love's captured there - exquisitely.

Now one last shot - sheer revelry
The shutter frames infinity
As past and future share a dance
As present sweethearts take a chance.




 Denise




[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 12-12-1999).]
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1 posted 12-12-1999 06:27 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Gorgeous, gorgeous - such were the images I saw!

Well done S.P

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2 posted 12-12-1999 06:33 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Awwwwwwwww !

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It's so easy to get lost in the promise of a picture--and sad that time changes and people move on, sometimes in different directions. I loved the last stanza--all of it.

 In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
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4 posted 12-12-1999 06:39 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Beautiful work Denise, but so often those sacred vows and promises are broken  

 The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
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5 posted 12-12-1999 06:41 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

This is pure poetry, Denise. Lovely.
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Beautiful, my friend!   I do enjoy paging through the album of your poetry.

 Nail to the mast her holy flag,
Set every threadbare sail-
And give her to the god of storms,
The lightning and the gale!
-Oliver Wendell Holmes

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Beautiful Denise!  

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Jesus is the reason for the season

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Thank you for reading and commenting, Severn, Marge, Martie, Isis, Balladeer, Elizabeth and Rebecca! I'm so glad you liked it!   (I just love this little smiley guy!)

 Denise


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Denise,
I do hope you gave this to her, this would be beautiful right on the very front page of their wedding alblum. Wonderful works my friend  
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10 posted 12-12-1999 09:04 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

....hehehehe, great minds think alike!  
My plans exactly! Thanks, Ruth!  


 Denise


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This is absolutely beautiful Denise.  I'm sure the wedding was inspiration for this.
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Thank you Eloise! Yes it was! Very inspiring! Both weddings. My youngest daughter was married last May and my oldest daughter was married last week! I am going to put this in both their wedding albums! And I'm really glad all the weddings are over with for me!  

 Denise


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Pure sweetness........

 Share what you are for you are what you share

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Thank you, First Knight! Glad you liked it!

 Denise


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Exquisite Denise.  One week and counting here...
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Thank you, Mike! I feel for you! But I'm sure it will be a lovely affair! Good luck!

 Denise


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Denise - That was beautiful...I think I have some goosebumps on my arms and maybe some tears welling....

Andrew

 
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18 posted 12-25-1999 11:25 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you so much Andrew! Sorry I didn't thank you earlier, I just found this now!  

 Denise


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awwwwww Denise, how in the world did I miss this??  It's lovely!!  Gee I'm glad you had a missed reply.  
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Thanks so much, Sally! I'm glad you liked it!

 Denise


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Fantasmic!!!
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Lovely...simply lovely!!
So where's the pictures Denise?  

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
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Thank you Nan and Pepper! I'm grateful for your read and comments! Pictures...have I got pictures! And now I have a scanner too!
I'll send you one via email!  

 Denise


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how precious
 
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