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Eboni
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0 posted 1999-12-12 03:41 PM


Dry my tears
Erase my fears
Hold my hand
Be my man
One true love
Sent from above
This feels so right
Please stay tonight
We should be together
4 always 4ever
But we are not
Damn I must have forgot
You belong to another
Your sons mother
Now what am I to do
Since I still love you
I know I should move on
And try to be strong
I want you to know that no matter how you feel
I love you still
And I always will

Luv Always T.



 Eboni Banks

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1 posted 1999-12-12 03:47 PM


Eboni -
Ouch !
But, I like the way you said it.
Very nicely done.


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lostboy
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since 1999-11-21
Posts 275
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2 posted 1999-12-12 03:58 PM


Dry your tears Eboni. With the love you express from your heart, the "right" one will never let it go.
Eboni
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3 posted 1999-12-12 04:25 PM


Thank you for posting your reply!!

 Eboni Banks

Denise
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4 posted 1999-12-12 05:23 PM


What a pity. Great poem, Eboni!

 Denise



Denise
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5 posted 1999-12-12 05:24 PM


..sorry, computer is playing games again!



[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 12-12-1999).]

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