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Wicked Witch of the East
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since 1999-11-09
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0 posted 1999-12-12 02:28 PM



In fifty-nine, was just wee boy,
I had two heroes, one was Roy,
My other idol, was much bigger,
A golden horse, by name of Trigger.

My Christmas wish, was for a horse,
A Palamino, gold of course,
On my knees, each night would pray,
Could hardly wait, for Christmas Day.

On Christmas morn, I woke at dawn,
Crept downstairs, out to the lawn,
There to a tree, a rope was tied,
Fresh horse droppings, not yet dried.

I stood and gazed upon bare rope,
I felt the pain of shattered hope,
As from behind, I heard Dad say,
I guess your horse, got plumb away.



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hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-12-12 03:23 PM


ROFL...funny stuff, you poor child you  
Denise
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2 posted 1999-12-12 04:49 PM


Hillarious!  

 Denise



Femme's Father
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since 1999-10-30
Posts 58
Carrollton, TX, USA
3 posted 1999-12-12 06:21 PM


This was really good, was sad but was also comical. Great job combining humor & sadness.

 A man's heart often cannot see the light - because of the darkness of it's own motives.... - James David

Dr.Moose1
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Bewilderment , USA
4 posted 1999-12-12 09:01 PM


In my house this would not have been an empty gift, though you wished for a horse , on the other end of the rope you were given a tree .
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