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lostboy
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since 11-21-1999
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0 posted 12-12-1999 11:50 AM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for lostboy

I'm kind of on this romantic poetry kick at the moment, bare w/ me!!

Every time we say goodbye
It's killing me slowly deep inside
I'm a man in love
One step from a ticket to Heaven

You only live once
Once is not enough with you
So with the time I have
I want the chance to make you happy

A romantic heart
A porch swing on a summer night
Skin so soft and smooth
I shudder from a touch so slight

I'm attracted to paradise
You've got me flying high
Girl it would be so nice
To say goodnight instead of goodbye

Tell me that you love me
Tell me you don't want me to go away
Tell me that you need me
Tell me you want me to stay
Just tell me....
© Copyright 1999 lostboy - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 12-12-1999 12:34 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

LostBoy -
Your 'romantic' nature is A-Okay
in my book !
Keep it coming.
I like ... and the 'porch swing'
really was charming.


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hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


2 posted 12-12-1999 02:55 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Hey...this heart can always handle romance. I like the romantic ones...shhh...don't tell anyone though  
lostboy
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Posts 284
New Hampshire, USA


3 posted 12-12-1999 03:51 PM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

Marge, you're A-OK, period!

hoot, no problem, we'll just keep it between us!
danni
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since 11-20-1999
Posts 693
wisconsin


4 posted 12-12-1999 03:59 PM       View Profile for danni   Email danni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for danni

Lostboy-as you already know, I too am a fan of your romantic heart. Can't you tell I find ya wherever you go on here. So actually you aren't such a lostboy are ya?   Nevermind , just in a goofy mood today, you'll have to excuse me.   So back to the point, this is yet another great poem. And I'll bear with your romantic kicks anytime. just keep 'em comein'.

[This message has been edited by danni (edited 12-12-1999).]
lostboy
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5 posted 12-12-1999 04:03 PM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

Once was lost but now am found danni? You're a doll, no need excusing goofy moods, I love it!!
Seaangel
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since 07-27-99
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6 posted 12-12-1999 04:34 PM       View Profile for Seaangel   Email Seaangel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seaangel

nice & romantic but not insipid, lostboy.
I thought your poem sounded like it would also be good as a song... ever thought about that?
Denise
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7 posted 12-12-1999 04:38 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Nothing wrong with romantic poems in my book! Very nice, lostboy!

 Denise


Eboni
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since 12-11-1999
Posts 18
Texas


8 posted 12-12-1999 04:50 PM       View Profile for Eboni   Email Eboni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eboni

I have only read two of your poems but your words inspire me. (Few people know that I am a hopeless romantic SHHH!)So keep the romance coming.

 Eboni Banks
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart


9 posted 12-13-1999 08:49 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart


I am Lost in your poetry........

Your heart I can see,
Your soul I can feel,

A ROMANTIC HEARTwas mentioned in verse three, I relate to thee,

In a poem you shall find the answer to the question you have asked.....

You are so sweet and Romantic! I love your work and I can't wait till your next post!
Dolphins3
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since 09-30-1999
Posts 142
Wisconsin


10 posted 12-13-1999 05:45 PM       View Profile for Dolphins3   Email Dolphins3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dolphins3

Lostboy, Great romantic poem. I especially love the line.... To say Goodnight instead of goodbye.  
 
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