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The ocean so deep

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vandana
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The ocean is so deep,
The clouds cover the sun,
As the flower grows eachday,
The oceans is so deep,
The sun sets ,
As the river flowing to the sea,
You beside me in a sailing boat,
Touching hands and the ocean so deep,
With your smile,
You touch my face with your fingers,
You know I love you
And ready to give everything,
The sun goes down,
As we make love,
The ocean so deep,,
So deep as our love is
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I really like the sentiments behind this one  
Mike
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Nice one Vandana....  
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