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The Lady

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First__Knight
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0 posted 12-12-1999 07:16 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for First__Knight





The Lady
~First Knight~


The day fades into night,
as birds begin their flight,
When shadows come to this land of ours.

A knight with a purpose,
Who often feels worthless,
For his search that leads to the stars

He searches for a lady,
a secret treasure not found
To hold his love,
and her heart unbound.

With a loving embrace,
moonlight and lace,
Spirit and grace,
with a loving face,
Does my dream lead me so far?

I would sit at her feet,
serve and not cheat.
Should she rule with the softest of hand.

Her cup will overflow,
As I watch our love grow,
And she will drink from the saucer I plan.

Another day has gone,
My thoughts wander on,
Of dreams of glory to be.

My plans of life,
Passions with a wife,
And love for all eternity




 Share what you are for you are what you share

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Severn
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1 posted 12-12-1999 07:22 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

So tender and beautiful...

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Nan
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The last stanza says it all.....
Saxoness
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Breathtaking first night, truly.



 "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 12-12-1999 09:19 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

First_Knight -
Breathtaking honesty.
Refreshingly sincere.
Very nice job.  I like it.


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hoot_owl_rn
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Could a lady fair
Dare to compair
With words as heartfelt as yours

They strike to the heart
Make one want a new start
Where darkness once claimed a sad soul


Very nice one David, I enjoyed it as usual.




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JennyLee
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6 posted 12-12-1999 11:04 AM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

Beautiful Read  

Jenny Lee


 Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Denise
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Beautiful! Very lovely!  

 Denise


Eboni
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Great poetry!
First__Knight
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Severn-  Your words always become you ..Thanks

Nan- Thank you  

Saxxoness- Love your nic.  Thank you for reading

Marge- I could only hope to ever become as good as you  

JennyLee- Thank you  

Denise- I am glad I could share it.

Eboni- Thank you too  

Ruth-

Make your way, and follow your heart,
Come to me and I will give you that start.

Don't delay for the time is close,
Start on the path that leads to the coast.

To the oceans of love I can give to you
Sharing and caring before I am through.

Will you take my hand and give the chance
That maybe you will find the road to romance.




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