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Break away from yesterday

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Kevin
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0 posted 12-12-1999 01:57 AM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kevin

Mystery surrounds you
But I have seen inside,
Your quiet style
your secret smile
your presence dignified.

I know you like to hide it
You play your little games
with eager eyes
and subtle lies
you fuel my inner flames.

And still inside there is that girl
unsure of what she’ll be.
so break away
from yesterday
and face the world with me.

****************************************

This came from that

The past but a reminder
of things that we regret.
The days gone bye
that you and I
fell through the safety net.

We live to keep on living
and never question why
with each days light
and coming night
this pattern we deny.

And though each hour offers
a world of disarray,
With pride we fight
tomorrow in site
to break away from yesterday


[This message has been edited by Kevin (edited 12-12-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
becoz
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1 posted 12-12-1999 08:08 AM       View Profile for becoz   Email becoz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for becoz

I really enjoyed this poem and it speaks the truth.  People should not be afraid or try
to hide who they are.  You seem to have good
insight into that and it makes your poem feel more honest.  
First__Knight
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2 posted 12-12-1999 08:13 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

This was very good. Sometimes being afraid keeps us in our own safe place and in a world we know....as you stand on uncharted waters you are not lost...but just now finding yourself.  May you break away and find your tomorrow as yesterday Kevin. :0

 Share what you are for you are what you share

Nan
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3 posted 12-12-1999 08:46 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Very nice, Kevin - You've a nice way with words....
Saxoness
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4 posted 12-12-1999 09:07 AM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

Hey, wonderful poem here. I actually had someone say something close to this to me one time...had a goodly amount of impact one me.

 "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

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5 posted 12-12-1999 09:25 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Kevin -
What a wonderful couplet of verses.
I so enjoy what you write.
The feelings you express are precious.
Enjoyed this very much.


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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One compliments the other very well Kevin, nice duo of poetry here  
Martie
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The writing, so well done and the message, a good one.
Denise
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8 posted 12-12-1999 06:09 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Two wonderful poems, Kevin! I love your style!  

 Denise


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great write here!
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10 posted 01-24-2006 11:13 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

A wonderful couple of couplets here Kevin, and I half way expected you to enter the "Masquerade Challenge" as Balladeer?   Nice reading you.
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Wonderful

ARCTIC WIND
 
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