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The weight that i can see........

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The Jackal
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sometimes solitude is my best friend
but even it leaves me in a whim
to fend for myself like i used too
to understand being crippled
like a snow blown machine i rave
crying let me out of here
im scared of living in fear
as lips lock under mistletoe
i struggle under weight
only i can see
but its too late ..
you can let me go...
my solitudes gone
and im one with the cold




 
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Your poems have great depth
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