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Kevin
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0 posted 12-12-1999 12:31 AM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kevin


Nobodyís perfect,
a fact we must face.
We've all had those times,
we wished to replace.
And too many lies,
I've had to go through,
to finally realize,
That perfect is you.

Iíve seen many days,
Watched them pass me by.
Been lost in the haze,
Till you caught my eye.
Drowning in wrong,
with one glance I knew,
after searching so long
that perfect is you.

disappointment expected,
a daily emotion.
Attraction neglected,
a useless commotion.
A life that was gray,
saw flashes of hue,
ever since the day,
that perfect was you.

© Copyright 1999 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 12-12-1999 12:44 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Hi Cutie Pie -
You hit the charts again with this one.
GREAT !  


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Kevin
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2 posted 12-12-1999 12:50 AM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kevin

marge
your always there to make me feel good,
im forever thankful your around =)
dont change
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 12-12-1999 11:14 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Kevin...I don't know about her, but this poem is perfect  
becoz
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4 posted 12-12-1999 11:33 AM       View Profile for becoz   Email becoz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for becoz

You are "right here" and Right on" with
this one.  I like your stlye
Mary
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5 posted 12-13-1999 12:39 PM       View Profile for Mary   Email Mary   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mary

I like this Kevin!  Keep up the good work!  
Echo Rhayne
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6 posted 12-13-1999 09:05 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

This is great Kevin and whomever this was written for should be gleaming from ear to ear with a delight and a sweetheart such as yourself!  Great poem and read!  

 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


 
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