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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Wanted One shoulder to cry on Two Arms to hold Two hands to pick up the pieces Two eyes to see my pain Ten Fingers to dry the tears One soul true to the end I am sorry about this one. This time of year is always very difficult for me. I tend to feel my isolation deeper then ever. This was written here with no editing or real effort at poetic correctness. It is from my soul. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
The rawness is appealing. I can understand the effect this season has on you. It will pass, in time. Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© ------------------------------------------------------- "Either kill me or take me as I am, because I'll be damned if I ever change..." Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade (Marquis de Sade) |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marilyn - I'm sorry that you feel isolation. Please know that I care and send you love and a *hug*. Cry your tears ... but, please ... know I care. ~Marge~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Marilyn - may I say I can identify in a way - I'm in this big large city with no family. More supportive hugs come out of my hug pack for you... *Hugs* K. (Oh, and like Dream - I loved the rawness of this.) |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Maeilyn, this season affexts many this way. I'm sure you know you have many friends here. I hope that helps. |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
We all share the same needs and sometimes we forget the things we have that are good by our focus being on that what we want. My want for you is that you find peace, love, happiness and know that there are many who find what you search for in you. May you always be that what fills thier hearts. I can see by the response here that you do affect others and your effect is held close by them. I don't know if you are a woman of faith but I say to you if you ask for the strength of the Lord....so shall it be given. Grace and light be with you Marilyn Share what you are for you are what you share |
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Rod Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 149Auckland New Zealand |
My heart also goes out to you..... I think First Knight has replied beautifully and with great wisdom. There is great power and solace to be found in those words. Be strong. Rod |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Marilyn, What a beautiful poem. I want it also. And we all want that friend, lover, companion or soulmate that will see our value and appreciate or Love us. Take care, James |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Marilyn, you are so not alone. I know we are words on a screen without a face but we are friends and family nonetheless. Nothing to be sorry about in writing from your soul, that's the best expression there is. This time of year is difficult for many, has been for myself for quite some time. Please, smile, and know myself and your friends here are definitely in each others hearts, no matter what time of year it is. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Glad to see you dropping us a line in spite of it all, Marilyn.....  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Marilyn, I do understand my friend. This time of year is a very hard one for me also. I think First Knight said it better than I can at this time. We have to keep that hope in our hearts. You are well loved my friend, never forget that. Hugs Ruth |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Thank you all for your words of support. I knew that I would recieve what I needed from my friends. I have much to be thankful for. Sometimes we just need to be reminded, it is stress and exhaustion that fuels my blues. First Knight...I am a woman of faith. I have found much strength in his arms. There are times seeing or feeling that is more difficult then others. Thanyou for your words. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Straight from the heart...very beautiful, Marilyn. HUGS to you. Denise |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
My sister, straight from my heart to yours. Know I understand, I love you, I care and I'm so sorry you feel so alone. It's of little physical consequence but I send oceans of love and understanding across the sea to you. (((HUGS))) The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
May your needs always be met here among those that care. I can see you are loved here and I am glad to be a part of passions that you call your friends home Share what you are for you are what you share |
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