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Marilyn
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0 posted 12-11-1999 10:24 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Marilyn

Wanted
One shoulder to cry on
Two Arms to hold
Two hands to pick up the pieces
Two eyes to see my pain
Ten Fingers to dry the tears
One soul true to the end

I am sorry about this one. This time of year is always very difficult for me. I tend to feel my isolation deeper then ever. This was written here with no editing or real effort at poetic correctness. It is from my soul.
© Copyright 1999 Marilyn - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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1 posted 12-11-1999 10:27 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

The rawness is appealing. I can understand the effect this season has on you. It will pass, in time.

 Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvilŠ
-------------------------------------------------------
"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade
(Marquis de Sade)

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 12-11-1999 11:39 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Marilyn -
I'm sorry that you feel isolation.
Please know that I care and send
you love and a *hug*.
Cry your tears ...
but, please ... know I care.
~Marge~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Severn
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3 posted 12-11-1999 11:42 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Marilyn - may I say I can identify in a way - I'm in this big large city with no family. More supportive hugs come out of my hug pack for you...

*Hugs* K.

(Oh, and like Dream - I loved the rawness of this.)
Balladeer
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4 posted 12-11-1999 11:47 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Maeilyn, this season affexts many this way. I'm sure you know you have many friends here. I hope that helps.
First__Knight
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5 posted 12-12-1999 03:43 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

We all share the same needs and sometimes we forget the things we have that are good by our focus being on that what we want.  My want for you is that you find peace, love, happiness and know that there are many who find what you search for in you.  May you always be that what fills thier hearts. I can see by the response here that you do affect others and your effect is held close by them. I don't know if you are a woman of faith but I say to you if you ask for the strength of the Lord....so shall it be given. Grace and light be with you Marilyn

 Share what you are for you are what you share

Rod
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6 posted 12-12-1999 03:52 AM       View Profile for Rod   Email Rod   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rod

My heart also goes out to you.....
I think First Knight has replied beautifully and with great wisdom. There is great power and solace to be found in those words.
Be strong.
Rod
JamesMichael
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7 posted 12-12-1999 07:29 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Marilyn,  What a beautiful poem.  I want it also.   And we all want that friend, lover, companion or soulmate that will see our value and appreciate or Love us.   Take care,  James
lostboy
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8 posted 12-12-1999 08:46 AM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

Marilyn, you are so not alone. I know we are words on a screen without a face but we are friends and family nonetheless. Nothing to be sorry about in writing from your soul, that's the best expression there is. This time of year is difficult for many, has been for myself for quite some time. Please, smile, and know myself and your friends here are definitely in each others hearts, no matter what time of year it is.
Nan
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9 posted 12-12-1999 08:49 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Glad to see you dropping us a line in spite of it all, Marilyn.....
hoot_owl_rn
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10 posted 12-12-1999 10:34 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Marilyn, I do understand my friend. This time of year is a very hard one for me also. I think First Knight said it better than I can at this time. We have to keep that hope in our hearts. You are well loved my friend, never forget that.
Hugs  
Ruth
Marilyn
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11 posted 12-12-1999 12:26 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Thank you all for your words of support. I knew that I would recieve what I needed from my friends. I have much to be thankful for. Sometimes we just need to be reminded, it is stress and exhaustion that fuels my blues.

First Knight...I am a woman of faith. I have found much strength in  his arms. There are times seeing or feeling that is more difficult then others. Thanyou for your words.
Denise
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12 posted 12-12-1999 05:58 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Straight from the heart...very beautiful, Marilyn. HUGS to you.

 Denise


Isis
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13 posted 12-12-1999 06:31 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

My sister, straight from my heart to yours. Know I understand, I love you, I care and I'm so sorry you feel so alone.  It's of little physical consequence but I send oceans of love and understanding across the sea to you.  (((HUGS)))


 The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

First__Knight
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14 posted 12-12-1999 10:21 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

May your needs always be met here among those that care.  I can see you are loved here and I am glad to be a part of passions that you call your friends home  

 Share what you are for you are what you share

 
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