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My rock

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 12-11-1999 09:20 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin


      My rock

The metamorphic
Womb of time.
Births drop by drop,
The heavens void,
Unborn to born,
By secret means,
Flowering the perpetuity,
Of annihilation
In incalculable,
Changing oblivion.
As I pray on this rock.

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Severn
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1 posted 12-11-1999 09:43 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Phew!
- Intense.
Running for the dictionary..hehe.
Denise
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2 posted 12-11-1999 09:50 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Somber piece, Seymour...intense it is. Well done. Perfect ending!

 Denise


Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 12-11-1999 11:06 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Severn,
How deep is deep?
Bless you Sy *L*
Denise,
It is said every rock is a temple.
I was just saying a prayer. *L*
Michael
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4 posted 12-11-1999 11:14 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Wow...awesome piece, Sy.  Very powerful words.  Me likes this one much.  

Michael

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Very deep
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 12-12-1999 03:16 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Michael,
Your remark was worth writing the poem, thanks.
Hoot,
Deep is good. *L*
 
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