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I've lost you

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tulip
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0 posted 12-11-1999 07:26 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for tulip


I've watched my innocence slip away
The memories holding tight
Each day moves by, each stocking hung
Reminding me in hindsight

I wonder how it happened, when
Before I saw some light
I only know that now I see
My lonliness at night

I want to feel the presence of
My soulmate at my side
A person who will stay with me
No matter how the tides

My sadness fills the hours of
The day and night that comes
I only hope to find myself
And show you of my love
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1 posted 12-11-1999 07:28 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

A wonderful wish, I think.

 "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

Denise
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2 posted 12-11-1999 08:16 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very sad, yet beautiful. I like this Tulip!

 Denise


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3 posted 12-11-1999 08:54 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Whimsical and melancholy - lovely writing.

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Thanks you guys.  It helps to know you enjoyed it!
 
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