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Denise
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0 posted 12-11-1999 02:37 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Denise

Perhaps they've gone at last not to return
Again to greet with kiss of fairest kind
To weave their magic charms that quell the yearn
That burning churn within the soul and mind.

Perhaps they've gone away just as they came
Clandestinely, unbidden, unannounced
Their going simply may be just the same
Might be they flee as fast as once they pounced.

Perhaps they only visit for a spell
Unwilling to be chained by time or space
Alas, perhaps they cannot longer dwell
Without a loss to them of fairest grace.

Perhaps tomorrow we shall meet again
Upon my paper flowing from my pen.


 Denise


© Copyright 1999 Denise - All Rights Reserved
lostboy
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1 posted 12-11-1999 02:56 PM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

This is really cool Denise. They bail on me from time to time too.....but they come back!
Master
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2 posted 12-11-1999 03:01 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

That Muse, always running around, well written!
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 12-11-1999 03:14 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Denise,
They elude me to. Clever little poem.
Martie
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4 posted 12-11-1999 03:32 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

The charm weavers abide within you, me thinks.

 In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)


[This message has been edited by Martie (edited 12-11-1999).]
Nan
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5 posted 12-11-1999 05:43 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

I like it.... and I can relate all too well...
Severn
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6 posted 12-11-1999 05:47 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Well, Sonnet Poet   - I don't think they would be gone for long! Their elusiveness makes them all the more satisfying - wonderful words.
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7 posted 12-11-1999 05:52 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Well done, Denise. Back they come...they always do but who knows what kind of mood they'll be in?
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8 posted 12-11-1999 05:55 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Denise,
   You are the word weaver of the highest
caliber. This is beautiful
Elizabeth
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9 posted 12-11-1999 06:14 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Denise -  LOVELY !

Captured
again
within
the pen
Colored
with the
poets ink
to make us
sigh and then
to make us think


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com
Denise
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10 posted 12-11-1999 08:05 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you, lostboy, Master, Seymour, Martie, Nan, Severn, Balladeer, Elizabeth and Marge for reading and commenting! And thank you, Severn, for your research! And you, Marge for the nice poem!  


 Denise


Mike
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11 posted 12-11-1999 09:08 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Truly enjoyed Denise.  
Denise
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12 posted 12-11-1999 09:36 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I'm so glad you enjoyed it Mike! Thank you!

Getting ready for the big day? Next weekend, right? Got any money left?! hehehe      Have a great time!  


 Denise


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Denise, send your muse my way dear, I could stand the inspiration

 "I am nothing special, of this I am sure. I am a common man with common thoughts and I've led a common life. There are no monuments dedicated to me and my name will soon be forgotten, but I've loved another with all my heart and soul, and to me , this has always been enough." ~Nicholas Sparks from The Notebook
Denise
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14 posted 12-12-1999 03:50 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Ruth, as soon as I find it I'll be glad to share but seems you do just fine from what I am reading! Thanks for reading mine!   (I like this little smiley face so much!)

 Denise


Nate Dogg
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15 posted 12-12-1999 04:13 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Lovely poem. It was well-written and very fluid too.
Seaangel
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16 posted 12-12-1999 04:30 PM       View Profile for Seaangel   Email Seaangel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seaangel

lovely poem, dsynder; although I think you  don't have anything to worry about!! I've just emerged from a dry spell and know while it seems eternity while you haven't anything to write, the words are out there....
Denise
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17 posted 12-12-1999 04:41 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you, Nate Dog, and Seaangel for reading and commenting! It is appreciated very much!  

 Denise


 
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