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Denise
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0 posted 1999-12-11 02:37 PM


Perhaps they've gone at last not to return
Again to greet with kiss of fairest kind
To weave their magic charms that quell the yearn
That burning churn within the soul and mind.

Perhaps they've gone away just as they came
Clandestinely, unbidden, unannounced
Their going simply may be just the same
Might be they flee as fast as once they pounced.

Perhaps they only visit for a spell
Unwilling to be chained by time or space
Alas, perhaps they cannot longer dwell
Without a loss to them of fairest grace.

Perhaps tomorrow we shall meet again
Upon my paper flowing from my pen.


 Denise



© Copyright 1999 Denise - All Rights Reserved
lostboy
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1 posted 1999-12-11 02:56 PM


This is really cool Denise. They bail on me from time to time too.....but they come back!
Master
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2 posted 1999-12-11 03:01 PM


That Muse, always running around, well written!
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 1999-12-11 03:14 PM


Denise,
They elude me to. Clever little poem.

Martie
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4 posted 1999-12-11 03:32 PM


The charm weavers abide within you, me thinks.< !signature-->

 In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)


[This message has been edited by Martie (edited 12-11-1999).]

Nan
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5 posted 1999-12-11 05:43 PM


I like it.... and I can relate all too well...
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6 posted 1999-12-11 05:47 PM


Well, Sonnet Poet   - I don't think they would be gone for long! Their elusiveness makes them all the more satisfying - wonderful words.
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7 posted 1999-12-11 05:52 PM


Well done, Denise. Back they come...they always do but who knows what kind of mood they'll be in?
Elizabeth Santos
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8 posted 1999-12-11 05:55 PM


Denise,
   You are the word weaver of the highest
caliber. This is beautiful
Elizabeth

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9 posted 1999-12-11 06:14 PM


Denise -  LOVELY !

Captured
again
within
the pen
Colored
with the
poets ink
to make us
sigh and then
to make us think


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Denise
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10 posted 1999-12-11 08:05 PM


Thank you, lostboy, Master, Seymour, Martie, Nan, Severn, Balladeer, Elizabeth and Marge for reading and commenting! And thank you, Severn, for your research! And you, Marge for the nice poem!  


 Denise



Mike
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11 posted 1999-12-11 09:08 PM


Truly enjoyed Denise.  
Denise
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12 posted 1999-12-11 09:36 PM


I'm so glad you enjoyed it Mike! Thank you!

Getting ready for the big day? Next weekend, right? Got any money left?! hehehe      Have a great time!  


 Denise



hoot_owl_rn
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13 posted 1999-12-12 11:21 AM


Denise, send your muse my way dear, I could stand the inspiration

 "I am nothing special, of this I am sure. I am a common man with common thoughts and I've led a common life. There are no monuments dedicated to me and my name will soon be forgotten, but I've loved another with all my heart and soul, and to me , this has always been enough." ~Nicholas Sparks from The Notebook

Denise
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14 posted 1999-12-12 03:50 PM


Ruth, as soon as I find it I'll be glad to share but seems you do just fine from what I am reading! Thanks for reading mine!   (I like this little smiley face so much!)

 Denise



Nate Dogg
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15 posted 1999-12-12 04:13 PM


Lovely poem. It was well-written and very fluid too.
Seaangel
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16 posted 1999-12-12 04:30 PM


lovely poem, dsynder; although I think you  don't have anything to worry about!! I've just emerged from a dry spell and know while it seems eternity while you haven't anything to write, the words are out there....
Denise
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17 posted 1999-12-12 04:41 PM


Thank you, Nate Dog, and Seaangel for reading and commenting! It is appreciated very much!  

 Denise



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