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Juxtaposed

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Marge Tindal
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Juxtaposed
~Marge Tindal~ 1999


Of love we spoke
on lovers peak.
You gave me the perfect rose.
Long before our love did meet
our hearts were juxtaposed.

Of thoughts and dreams
my mind did scheme,
to think of things so grand.
You gave me the perfect rose
and then you took my hand.

On lovers peak
of love we spoke.
You gave me the perfect rose.
Long after the moment of reckoning
our hearts were juxtaposed.



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com
© Copyright 1999 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 12-11-1999 02:20 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful, Marge! Simply beautiful!  

 Denise


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And you gave us the perfect poem. Very nice Marge!
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Marge,
Clever and well done.
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4 posted 12-11-1999 04:05 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I'm out of roses, Marge, but I would gladly give my tulips!


Beautiful poem, btw.
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5 posted 12-11-1999 04:54 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

This one I find likes me well.

 Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
                                            DreamEvilŠ
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"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade
                        (Marquis de Sade)



[This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 12-11-1999).]
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Short but very sweet.  This is beautiful...
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Charming work, Marge.  K
Marge Tindal
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8 posted 12-11-1999 06:32 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Denise - Muchly, I thank you.
LostBoy - I'm soooo glad you think so.
Seymour - My thanks to you.
Balladeer - DEAL !
DreamEvil - Glad to be liked.
RSEvans - Many thanks.
Severn - You are a busy gal.  Thank you for taking the time to read and respond.


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com
Elizabeth Santos
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Marge,
You're on a roll!
Liz
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I like that word and this poem
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Absolutely enchanting Marge
Enjoyed it immensely!
Well done.
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Charming Marge as always....simple and charming  

 Share what you are for you are what you share

Marge Tindal
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Elizabeth -
My friend ... thank you.

Hoot -
Yeah, isn't it a neat word? Glad you liked.

Rod -
Thank you, I enjoyed doing it.
Glad you found it 'enchanting'.

First_Knight -
I am pleased that you found it 'charming'.
Thank you.


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


 
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