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Till the Break of Day

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Dark Angel
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    Till the Break of Day

The whistling sound of the wind
Takes me back to that night
To that night when we had sinned
Underneath the great starlight.
Oh! The guilt that I had felt
When my heart you did melt
Take me there once again
I want to feel like I did then.
How you took me to great heights
Tempting me with such delights
Please take me back to that night
When everything felt so right.
Love me till the break of day
As the whistling wind fades away.



 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


© Copyright 1999 Dark Angel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 12-11-1999 08:53 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

This is beautiful DA....!!

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


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2 posted 12-11-1999 09:35 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

DarkAngel - Very nice indeed.

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Dark Angel
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Pepper and Marge, thank you both so very much  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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4 posted 12-11-1999 06:25 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

This has a controlled urgency to it that makes it very appealing. Good work, angel.

 To the world you might be just one person but to one person you might just be the world.

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5 posted 12-11-1999 07:22 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

This is very good. The last line gave me chills!  
Dark Angel
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Balladeer, Thank you so very much Handsome  
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PDV, I'm glad you like it, Thank you!  



 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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7 posted 12-11-1999 08:56 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

My my - this is a charm.
WhtDove
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WooHoo girl! Way to go! Very, very good!

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DreamEvil
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9 posted 12-11-1999 11:50 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

This is an excellent verse soul-sib. Your writing skills progress well.

 Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
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Dark Angel
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Thank you Soul-Brother *hugs*  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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With words this strong how could any man wait till the break of day....Hehe  Very beautiful.  

 Share what you are for you are what you share

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12 posted 12-12-1999 10:29 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Wow, this one definately rocks my friend  
JennyLee
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Love this one Dark Angel  

"Tempting me with such delights"  

Jenny


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Ruth and Jenny, It makes me happy to know you ladies liked it, thank you.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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This poem is awesome DA - well done!

HUggs.......
Dark Angel
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Thanks again Moonshine  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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sweet!
Susan Caldwell
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Really liked this Maree.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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19 posted 01-24-2006 11:08 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

I was down here reading Martie and thought of you (that is a compliment.)  Shame we can't ever turn back the pages isn't it?  A weenie up the pole for ya 'cause I can and will!
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Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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