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SeaDragon
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since 1999-12-11
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0 posted 1999-12-11 01:46 AM



A mountain--but too great to climb
So we hide in a shadow, calling it Time.
What shelters we've made--
So blind, so afraid,
Even truth must be hidden in Rhyme . . .

© Copyright 1999 SeaDragon - All Rights Reserved
PhaerieChild
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since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon
1 posted 1999-12-11 01:52 AM


It is a sad truth that things somehow must be wrapped in rhyme in order to get the message across, but I for one am glad for it in a lot of ways. Otherwise I wouldn't have anything to do with my spare time. LOL Really enjoyed the read and BTW WELCOME to Passions!!!

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho



Severn
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since 1999-07-17
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2 posted 1999-12-11 02:10 AM


What a sweet entry to our family...

Welcome!

    

Marge Tindal
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
3 posted 1999-12-11 09:40 AM


SeaDragon - Welcome to the circle of friendship found here at Passions.
This is a haunting introduction to your work and exceptionally well done.
Hope to see more.


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
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Hurricane Alley
4 posted 1999-12-11 09:51 AM


Welcome to the family! I enjoyed your first poem here and look forward to reading more from you. Please let me know if you ever have any questions!  

Sally S.
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 847
Ohio
5 posted 1999-12-11 10:00 AM


Welcome! Welcome!  
There are always hidden meanings in really good poetry.  I look forward to finding yours.

Saxoness
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since 1999-07-18
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Texas
6 posted 1999-12-11 05:38 PM


welcome to passions, what a wonderful entry piece!

 "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


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