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creeping castles

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paperguardian
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0 posted 12-10-1999 09:41 PM       View Profile for paperguardian   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for paperguardian


In quiet havens
have I sought you,
    (as a mind will be drawn to a knot
     in the labor of pull and tug)
and always lounging about
on some lesser thought
you would address me.

Talking to me of love
of poetics
in margins of metaphors -
forever indulging
then barging
through my ideality
      (as though you own the place...)

And yes I can say
you have purchased the night sky -
brought it down upon your eyes
bidding me to gaze
then wish on the stars I see there

this
now
and ever again
will
I love you
for the dreamer has awakened.
© Copyright 1999 paperguardian - All Rights Reserved
Balladeer
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1 posted 12-10-1999 10:36 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

This is very well done, guardian.
Denise
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2 posted 12-10-1999 10:37 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Simply Beautiful!      

 Denise


SeaDragon
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I remember when I first learned that stars are dust.  We are forever dreaming and waking up.  Souls are less predictable than stars, and perhaps more beautiful for being unexpected.
Severn
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4 posted 12-11-1999 02:15 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Wonderful words wrapped in a wonderful style.

K
hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 12-12-1999 11:30 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very well written  
 
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