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Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05
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Bewilderment , USA

0 posted 1999-12-10 08:53 PM


I've got just one question
That has been on my mind
Where there isn't much room
And what's there is hard to find

I could be mistaken
Or maybe just confused
But since I came to Passions
Not so dark are my blues

And my whites are so much brighter
Not that washed out shade of gray
It's like detergent for the psyche
And each day is laundry day

I might have been on spin too long
And I may still be soaking wet
What with Elmer and Ad and M. Marceau
Are there more that I've not met?

Though I suppose it would not matter
It might even be more fun
As long as they do their own laundry
Looks like mine will never get done !



© Copyright 1999 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

1 posted 1999-12-10 09:03 PM


Do tell, Dr - is there a prescription one can get for being permanently soaking wet?

LOL  

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-12-10 09:08 PM


Yep, this place has the same effect on me too! Ain't it great?!   Great poem!

 Denise



Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
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3 posted 1999-12-10 09:12 PM


We must be a washing machine 'cause we're certainly full of Cheer! and some of us are fit to be Tide! Oh, Whisk me away!!!!!!!!
Nan
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4 posted 1999-12-10 09:14 PM


You use Passions with Color Safe Bleach too???.....
Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA
5 posted 1999-12-10 09:15 PM


Severn,
I don't know about a prescription , otherwise I wouldn't be doing laundry. However , this place has been some what of a presciption for me  . Thanks for the comment!

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA
6 posted 1999-12-10 09:18 PM


Hey , no fair , you guys didn't even let me get out of the rinse cycle yet! Oh well, it won't be the first time I've been caught in the lint trap !
caroline
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since 1999-08-16
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7 posted 1999-12-10 09:19 PM


Not to mention how much you Gain by "Surf"ing here! And ALL the poets are great...just a-Dreft in talent! Yep, this is definitely an April Fresh kinda place to be!  

It'll whiten your whites, brighten your colors, soften your day, and make ya smell good too!

Love your poem Doc  

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain


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